1 Academic Writing II Spring 2013 Meet twice a week Monday, Tuesday Time: Monday 8:00-9:50 (3-106) Wednesday 4:10-6:00 (1- 307) Phone: Website: Office Hours: (ICB 319) Wednesday 6-8, Thursday 10-12

2 Today: Homework Due: Journal 3, Reading Handout FOV 6 Go over grammar quiz Writing Test T1 T2 Homework: Essay Final Draft

Week 9: Midterm Exam No classes week 9 April 24 th, Wednesday: 9:00-10:00am *must arrive by 8:20 for listening test

A.Writing T1-T2 Remember do T2 first (66.% of the grade) and T1 secondly.

Writing Task 1: Choc Production How chocolate is produced, manufacturing process Notice there are 10 steps according to the diagram. Notice the general trends: growing, transporting, and processing the chocolate. Do not report on all features, just the main trends. Then, specifically mention a few of the important processes. For the conclusion, just paraphrase your introduction. Illustration = diagram, illustrated figure, set of pictures, layout, drawing, representation on chocolate production

T2: Synonyms 1. talent = ability, skill, to have a knack for sth 2. to be born with talent = inborn talent = innate talent = raw talent/ability = god-given ability = to be endowed with gifts 3. a genius = a savant = an idiot savant = born a genius = a naturally born genius = gifted kids = hand picked by god 4. fostered talent = book smart, learned abilities, acquired knowledge 5. the age old question of nature vs. nurture = book smart vs. street smart 6. “hard work beats talent” Quote: “hard work beats talent when talent refuses to work hard” 7. on the other hand = to the opposite end 8. clever = street smart, to have moxy, to be cunning (like a fox), to be savvy, to have the right stuff, to be mentally deft

Academic Reading Test 1: Grading IELTS Academic Reading marking The approximate band scores can be calculated using this table:

Academic Reading Test 1: Grading Your test was graded on a curve. An A = 7.0 and so on. The high score was 8.0 and low was 5.0. This test was modified to be slightly easier than a real test.

Writing: T1 & T2: Get High Score See attached doc Available for handout Compare Official Band Descriptors with Simplified.

Essay 1: Mistakes Basic Rules (also for IELTS): 1. Thesis must have a topic and an opinion 2. Don't put pronouns in the thesis or topic sentences. No connectors either. Ex: She has taught me how to be a better man by... Ex: Frankly speaking, my grandfather is amazing for three key reasons which are Conclusion must be at least 4 sentences long.

Vocabulary: Chap 7 p.64 Make a list of adjectives that describe you If you could change sth, what would it be? Do you have a hero or role model?

Vocabulary Chap 7 Words: accuracy, accurate demonstrate, demonstrative, demonstration achieve, achievement intense, intensity, intensely alter, alteration mental, mentally reject, rejection attribute, attributive, attribution motivate, motivation, motivating stable, stability challenge, challenging emerge, emerging participant, participate, participation consistent, consistently perceive, perception Vision, visual, visually

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays, there are basically two ways to bring up children. One is to encourage them and let them do what they want and make their own decisions. The other is to guide them strictly to do what the parent thinks best. Which method of fostering children do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that it is parents' responsibility to teach children how to become good members of society, while others think it is the job of schools. Whose responsibility do you think it is to teach children the values of society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

WRITING TASK 2 You should spend 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: It is generally believe that some peopple are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sportsman or musician. Which side do you believe has the biggest influence on us, nature or nurture? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times particularly in the areas of mathematics and science. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it. Write at least 250 words.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: The children of rich families are better able to cope and deal with the pressures of society and therefore are more successful. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Check: Before I die... Imagine you are on the mountain dying of a wound, what things will you regret about your life. What things would you like to tell your mates or your fellow mountaineers before you die. Use appropriate description with idioms, collocations, metaphors, dialogue (speaking) 100+ words

Activity: Choose one, write topic, thesis, supporting evidence What is the most important quality of a good friend? What do you think can make friends break up? Why do modern people have fewer friends these days? What do you think of the educational system in your country? How can teachers encourage creativity in students? Who is the most successful person you know? Do you think an adventurous spirit is born or nurtured? What kind of people are more likely to succeed? Who do you admire the most?

Example 1. What is the most important quality of a good friend? Topic: Important quality of friends Thesis: Friendship can teach us the benefits of teamwork, as well as how to get along with others and be successful, therefore trust is an essential quality in a good friend.

Metaphors and Similes Make comparisons of two dissimilar things. Similes use the word as/like Metaphors do not Ex: Simile – Bill was like an annoying bird chirping in my ear Ex: Metaphor – Bill was an annoying bird chirping in my ear

Metaphors and Similes Ex: Simile – Bill ran as fast as a cheetah in the school marathon. Ex: Metaphor – Bill was a cheetah in the school marathon. Similes make the sentence meaning more clear and therefore are used for rare comparisons. Metaphors are more ambiguous and are more poetic.

Common Similes "as old as dirt" "slow as molasses" "white as a ghost". “run like the wind”

Common Metaphors Bill is a pig This room is an oven. = a hot room The crowd began to simmer down. = calm down You are a recipe for disaster = someone who's personality will always cause trouble (note: “recipe for disaster” is a set phrase you cannot change it) A wire is a highway for electrons (it is not actually a highway) Veins are highways for blood The lawyer grilled the witness = the witness felt so hot due to questioning by the lawyer

Very Common Metaphors – Cooking Boiling mad = very angry The netizens flamed Bill on the blog = said bad things about him James cooked Bill = yelled at him He knew that he was going to be toast when he faced his parents

Activity: Make a sentence using: To be boiling mad To flame someone To cook someone To be toast Make a sentence 1-4.

Examples: 1. Jane was boiling mad when she discovered her boyfriend playing badminton with another girl. 2. A hobby of lonely or shy people is often to flame others on internet blogs. 3. The doctor cooked the trainee for making a critical mistake in the medical exam. 4. I'm going to be toast when my father finds out that I missed 2 Biology classes.

Activity – make a metaphor with the following word sets Car, refrigerator Tommy, pig Cindy, mule Bill, glass of water Chad, airplane

Activity – make a metaphor or simile with the following word sets Even though it was a burning hot day, my car was as cool as a refrigerator thanks to the new air conditioner. Tommy is as cute as a pig. Cindy is a mule when it comes to her studies, she won't even take a break to eat lunch until her homework is finished! Bill is as plain as a glass of water. (also pure, boring, dull, transparent) Chad was an airplane in track, gaining the gold medal in running.

32 Essay: Useful Idioms 2 1. paint the town red = ? 2. kill two birds with one stone = ? 3. don't cry over spilled milk = ? 4. the early bird catches the worm = ? 5. butterflies in the stomach = ? 6. fish out of water = ? 7. give it a whirl = ? 8. tip of the iceberg = ? 9. black sheep = ? 10. bring home the bacon = ?

33 Essay: Useful Idioms 2 1. paint the town red = have an amazing night around town! 2. kill two birds with one stone = accomplish 2 things at once 3. don't cry over spilled milk = don't worry about a small thing 4. the early bird catches the worm = early person has advantage 5. butterflies in the stomach = nervous 6. fish out of water = in a new environment 7. give it a whirl = give it a try 8. tip of the iceberg = just a small part of the whole 9. black sheep = sb who is different than others in a group 10. bring home the bacon = the bread winner, provide for the family

Activity – make a sentence with the following idioms Butterflies in the stomach fish out of water black sheep paint the town red

Common Idioms 3 Apple of my eye Carry a torch for someone Kick the bucket / have a bucket list Diamond in the rough My knight in shining armor Have your cake and eat it too All the world's a stage Be like clay

Common Idioms 3 Apple of my eye = your treasure Carry a torch for sb = carry love for sb Kick the bucket = to die Diamond in the rough = sth good in the bad My knight in shining armor = your hero Have your cake and eat it too = best of both worlds All the world's a stage = everyone plays their part in this world To be like clay = moldable, easy to control (person) *neutral word *

Activity – make a sentence with the following word sets Jane, clay Bill, diamond in the rough Bill, kick the bucket Jane, have her cake and eat it too

Essay Types: You will write 2 essays and weekly journals 1. Remembering an Event ( words) Something that happened to you. An interesting event that you remember clearly. 2. Writing a Profile ( words) You will describe something or someone. 3. Proposing a Solution ( words) You will discuss a problem and explain how to fix it 6. Journal Entries These will be given by the instructor. They will cover various topics. Very similar to IELTS Task 2 questions 7. Vocabulary Quiz A weekly quiz on the target words

39 Course Schedule: Lesson ALesson B Week 4Essay 1: Choose your topicT2 Week 5Essay 1 Rough Draft Due (550+ words) Week 6Essay 1 Final Draft WEDNESDAY(550+ words) Week 7T1 T2 J3 Week 8Quiz J4 Week 9Midterm

Journal 1 Different Shops Write an essay comparing and contrasting the experience of shopping at two different kinds of stores. Use specific reasons and examples to illustrate the stores' similarities and differences. Use 4 vocabulary words from Chapter 6

Journal 2 Choose an IELTS Task 2 question and answer it. Remember choose a trend or a problem. Then use the format “what are your opinions on this” Use 4 vocabulary words from Chapter 6

Journal 3: Bucket List A bucket list is a list of things you want to do in your life before you die. Although this is a creative writing assignment, you must still follow the correct structure as usual words, follow normal structure: Introduction, Body, Conclusion. Make a thesis

Journal 4: IELTS T2 Choose a science or technology based IELTS Task 2 question and answer it. Remember choose a trend or a problem. Then use the format “what are your opinions on this” Write the question clearly and paraphrase it for the introduction words, use 4 vocabulary words from Chapter 7

Journal 4: Tech TOPICS: people's reliance on machines, government spending money for space exploration and development of new energy tech like ITER or CERN, military tech, functional robots Will modern people forget basic survival and necessary skills like writing and cooking because they use machines too much? How do you think people in the future will use robots? Why do people long for tech?

Homework Journal 4 (due next Wed.) Reading: Chap. 7 FOV p – next week Chap 7 words quiz