Due Today: Extended Rough Draft Peer Editing Act V The Face of War Homework: Revise essays—final draft due Wednesday THURSDAY, NOVEMBER 13 TH :

RHETORICAL ESSAY PEER EDIT Objective: I will discuss and evaluate the parameters for rhetorical analysis in a peer’s paper. 1.Does the author have a clearly stated, relevant thesis? 2.Are there clear, solid, arguable claims that avoid making such obvious statements as, “Shakespeare uses pathos in Henry’s speeches.” Instead, trying something like, “Shakespeare masterfully employs vivid imagery to emotionally inspire his outnumbered, beleaguered troops to fight for all they love.” 2.Does the most effective data support the claim, balancing quantity and quality. Did the writer remember to correctly cite? Were quotes appropriately introduced. For instance, King Henry so wittily turns one of his army’s greatest deficits into their greatest asset when he admonishes his cousin for desiring more forces, “…if to live, /The fewer men the greater share of honour.” (Shakespeare IV.iii.22-23). 3.Are the warrants explicitly connecting the data to the claim? Do they avoid vague generalizations and ambiguous conclusions? Review Purdue’s OWL Claim/Data/Warrant page that is linked on my website.

Henry V Extended Essay Assessment Write an essay in which you analyze the rhetorical strategies Shakespeare employs to develop his tone toward the Machiavellian prince. Support your analysis with specific references to the text. Complete final draft due: Friday, November 19 th. Components of a solid, extended introduction: 1. Hook 2. Thesis (your definition of Shakespeare’s tone toward Henry V) 3. Map—preview of the devices you will explore

Henry V, Act V Objective: I will analyze the rhetorical strategies employed by a playwright to identify the main character’s and the author’s purposes. In your composition book, please make the following chart: Henry’s Purpose in Act VShakespeare’s Purpose in Act V Henry’s RhetoricShakespeare’s Rhetoric

This photograph, taken by National Geographic Photographer Steve McCurry, donned the magazine’s cover in June To this day, it is one of the publication’s most poignant images. The girl is a 12 year old Afghan refugee. Step 1: What speaks to you? What do you imagine her story to be? What is this photo’s purpose? Objective: You will identify the rhetoric of an image by writing reflections regarding its characteristics.

COMPARE/CONTRAST Step 2 What tone do you suspect the photographer must have taken to get this shot? How would you describe the girl’s tone? What perspective is offered in the photo?

A LIFE REVEALED Step 3 As you watch the following documentary, carefully consider the portrayal of war in each. In your composition book, draw a Venn Diagram in which you can record your conclusions.

PERSPECTIVES ON WAR Henry V A Life Revealed

AFGHAN GIRL—A PORTRAIT OF WAR National Geographic Cover

A LIFE REVEALED SITES Part 1 Part 2 fu Part 3 Part 4

REFLECTION War is one of the most complex human experiences of all. Is it important for citizens of the world to turn a critical lens on a variety of topics on the subject—news articles, poetry, stories, editorials, plays, paintings, photographs, etc.? Should those works studied be from diverse backgrounds? Explain.