Parallel Structure. What is Parallel Structure? Parallel structure involves putting together elements of similar structure to achieve balanced writing.

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Parallel Structure

What is Parallel Structure? Parallel structure involves putting together elements of similar structure to achieve balanced writing Winston Churchill did not say I have nothing to offer but bleeding, toil, tears, and sweating He said I have nothing to offer but blood, toil, tears and sweat

Parallel Structure To make your writing parallel, use the same grammatical form for all items in a list Lists can be any of these things: Parts of a sentence Headings in a report Items in a resume Bulleted lists

Parallel Structure In Sentences Poor: Betty has intelligence, honesty, and she is funny. Improved: Betty has intelligence, honesty, and she is funny humor.

Parallel Structure In Sentences Poor: Good writing requires you to plan outlines, write several drafts, and revision. Improved: Good writing requires you to plan outlines, write several drafts, and revision revise your work.

Parallel Structure in Lists Poor: I left my job for several reasons: The pay was poor Long hours I found the work tedious Equipment was dangerous Improved: I left my job for several reasons: Poor pay Long hours Tedious work Dangerous equipment

Parallel Structure in Headings Poor: Identifying your Purpose Audience Analysis The Importance of Outlines Prepare a Draft How to Revise your Work Improved: Identify your Purpose Analyze your Audience Write an Outline Prepare a Draft Revise your Work

How would you fix this sentence? We should stop police brutality because it harms people physically and emotionally, victimizing innocent people, and people lose trust in the police.