kj Nanjing Pukou Foreign Language School Wendy Zhou

Do you know this TV programme? We recommended them to this show. It shows the most touching ( 感人的 ) people in China. recommend sb to be the monitor recommend sb as the monitor

Many people take part in this TV show

She got the ________. award an

different kinds ofawards back

She helps build a new school in the village. kind and helpful personalities 性格、品质

She didn ’ t buy new clothes for herself for many years. She gives the money to the poor in need. plan everything well generous 慷慨的 thoughtful 考虑周全的

He is 91 years old. He helps the poor children in need by picking up some useless things. kind and helpful be ready to help others

He can ______________________, so he is ____. helpful What kind of people are they? hard-working kind personalities ( 性格 ) do they have ？ thoughtful help the poor children in need can help build a new school in the village can plan everything well What can they do to help others? work hard in the village

The Best Class Leader Award ( 最佳班干部 ) The Most Hard-working Student Award ( 最勤奋同学 ) Different awards in our class The Most Helpful Student Award ( 最乐于助人同学 ) Who do you recommend? Why? (just one reason is OK.) The Most Humorous student Award ( 最幽默同学 )

Which award did Daniel get? Why did Mr Wu write this letter? What kind of boy is Daniel? Daniel is ___________. Daniel thinks ________ Daniel is ___________. Young Star Award clever carefully kind No it isn’t. It is a recommendation letter. He wrote the letter to recommend Daniel. Is it an invitation letter? 一封推荐信 Read silently is thoughtful

Why Daniel is clever, helpful, thoughtful and kind? clever helpful kind / friendly thoughtful He can learn things He helps at the club. He helps the boy who lost his way.lost his way He plans everything. quickly. often He thinks. always carefully. well. He activities to help the children in need. takes part in

? lose one’s way back

Daniel is a clever boy. He learns things quickly. He can use computer well. write some examples to make your writing persuasive ( 有说服力的 ) Daniel is a clever boy. He learns things quickly. He can use computer well. When he is free, he often helps at the Helping Hands Club and does most of the computer work for the club. Which one is better? examplesWriting skills 1

Daniel always thinks things carefully when he works. He plans everything well. He is a member of our Project Hope group and often takes part in activities like collecting clothes and books for children in need. well, quickly, slowly, carefully… Make your writing vivid ( 生动的 ) always everything often carefully Writing skills 2 write adverbs ( 副词 ) write adverbs of frequency ( 频率副词 ) often, always, usually...

Daniel is really kind. Last week, a five-year- old boy lost his way and was crying in the street. Daniel saw him and took him to the police station. He stayed with the boy and played with the boy for two hours before the boy ’ s parents came. Add some words to emphasis ( 强调 ) Make your writing better. (really, for two hours etc.) really for two hours Writing skills 3

Para 1 Para 2 Para 5 The structure of the article What is the letter about? Daniel is _____. Daniel is ______. clever thoughtful kind Para 3 Para 4 Introduction Who would you like to recommend? Main body Conclusion ability( 能力 ) + example personality 1 + example personality 2 + example

Writing the recommendation letter. Introduction I would like to recommend sb. for …Award. I am writing to express my full support for… Main body 1. Personalities learn…quickly; be able to do, have the ability to do … ， 2. Abilities 3. Examples Conclusion We think … should get an award. kind, helpful, polite, hard-working, thoughtful, brave, careful, happy, confident （自信的）， organized （有组织能 力的）， serious ( 认真的）， generous （慷慨的） … 擅长于 be good at; be clever at; do well in, can do sth well

The Most Popular Student Award ( 最受欢迎同学 ) The award in our class Group Discussion Write a recommendation letter for him/her !

How to Appraise( 评价 ) a good writing? ( 内容，结构，语言 ) correct tense ( 正确的时态 ) words formation ( 单词的正确形式 ) writing examples ( 举例说明 ) write in different paragraphs ( 分段描写 ) conjunctions and adverbs ( 连词, 副词使用恰当 ) no spelling mistakes ( 没有拼写错误 ) handwriting ( 书写是否工整 ) How many stars can you get?

No one is perfect. Learn from each other. Try to be the best of ourselves.

Write a recommendation letter for one of your classmates. Homework Be a volunteer in Youth Olympic Games Show your letter at the speech competition next month.