台州一中 周永鹏 读后续写

met each other and fell in love got married and had babies the Goddess got angry forced to leave each other cross the Milky Way to meet only once a year The Story of The Herd Boy and The Weaving Girl

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auctioneer 拍卖人 __________________ bidder 出价人 ___________________ lot 拍卖物 __________________________________ __________________________ for appreciation and for sale fine pieces of artistry and craftsmanship An auction conduct the auction make a bid for the lot

Who: What: Para1 I was taken to an ______ at the ___________ downtown where everything was for ______. Para2.3.4 Since nothing ______ my eye, I climbed upstairs and ate some _____ while ______(lean) on the railing( 栏杆 ). As I pulled a pack of mints from my ______ to get rid of onion _______, I _________ pull out my keychain, which dropped inside an expensive _____. I ran downstairs to stage a _______ but unfortunately my hand was ______. I felt __________ Para5.6.7 What's worse, I heard the _________ began the auction with the vase. Everyone was walking toward me, including my ________. Para1 I was taken to an ______ at the ___________ downtown where everything was for ______. Para2.3.4 Since nothing ______ my eye, I climbed upstairs and ate some _____ while ______(lean) on the railing( 栏杆 ). As I pulled a pack of mints from my ______ to get rid of onion _______, I _________ pull out my keychain, which dropped inside an expensive _____. I ran downstairs to stage a _______ but unfortunately my hand was ______. I felt __________ Para5.6.7 What's worse, I heard the _________ began the auction with the vase. Everyone was walking toward me, including my ________. auctionart gallery caught snacksleaning accidentally vaserescue stuckembarrassed auctioneer the author; his parents; auctioneer sale pocketbreath parents

Para(2.3.4) Para(8) Para(1) Para(5.6.7) A.Development B. Climax( 高潮 ) C. Beginning D. End What's the style of the passage? A. Narration( 记叙 ) B. Exposition( 说明 ) C. Argumentation( 议论 )

The underlined key words: auction parents snacks and drinks keychain vase dropped rescue my hand stuck auctioneer underlined words （选 5 个以上） who ( 人物）： scene （场景）： vase （事件）： underlined words （选 5 个以上） who ( 人物）： scene （场景）： vase （事件）： parents auctioneer auction vase keychain dropped my hand stuck rescue ？

Focus on the connection of the two given sentences Paragraph 7: Everyone was walking toward me, including my parents. Paragraph 8: My dad leaned in close and whispered in the auctioneer ’ s ear. It was my dad who got me out of trouble. in troublemy dadwisdom/ idea get me out of trouble In Para7, I told my dad that I was in trouble. In Para8, my dad came up with an idea to get me out of...

Paragraph 7: Everyone was walking toward me, including my parents. Q1: What's their feeling when seeing me holding a vase? embarrassed/nervous Q2: How would I feel? surprised Q3: What would my parents do? asked for what had happened

Paragraph 7: Everyone was walking toward me, including my parents. 1. They were very surprised. 2. I felt very embarrassed and nervous. 3. My dad asked me what had happened. 4. I told the fact to my dad. The underlined key words: auction parents snacks and drinks keychain vase dropped rescue my hand stuck auctioneer My hand was stuck in the vase. add some details Use advanced words, phrases & sentences Use transitional words （过渡语）

Paragraph 7: Everyone was walking towards me, including my parents. They were very surprised. I felt very embarrassed and nervous. My dad asked me what had happened. I told the fact to my dad. With the entire room staring at me, they were whispering in surprise why I was holding the vase. As a result, I lowered my head with embarrassment, standing there like a fool. Meanwhile, I was so nervous that my heart was beating very fast. Then my dad made his way to me and asked, “What are you doing?” Nothing was going to sound more unbelievable than the truth. “My hand is stuck,” I said in a low voice. “Oh, Mark,” my mom cried.

Paragraph 7: Everyone was walking towards me, including my parents. With the entire room staring at me, they were whispering in surprise why I was holding the vase. As a result, I lowered my head with embarrassment, standing there like a fool. Meanwhile, I was so nervous that my heart was beating very fast. Then my dad made his way to me and asked, “What are you doing?”Nothing was going to sound more unbelievable than the truth. “My hand is stuck,” I said in a low voice. “Oh, Mark,” my mom cried. add some details Use advanced words, phrases & sentences Proper transition

Paragraph 8: My dad leaned in close & whispered in the auctioneer’s ear. Q1: What would my dad whisper to the auctioneer? Yes. Q2: Did they agree or not? told my trouble and asked if he could buy the vase Q3: How did my dad get my hand out of the vase? used vegetable oil/soapy water to slide my hand out

Paragraph 8: My dad leaned in close and whispered in the auctioneer’s ear. 1. My dad told the fact to him and decided to buy the vase. 2. The auctioneer asked for agreement. 3. Nobody opposed and my parents took me home with the vase. 4. My dad used oil to get my hand out together with the keychain. The underlined key words: auction parents snacks and drinks keychain vase dropped rescue my hand stuck auctioneer The way to get me out of the vase

Paragraph 8: My dad leaned in close and whispered in the auctioneer’s ear. The auctioneer nodded and spoke, “Ladies and gentlemen, since it appears this vase also comes with a red-faced young man, are there any objections to letting his parents purchase the piece at a reasonable price?” I heard some laughs at the idea of a bidding war breaking out for a vase with me attached, but luckily no one did. “Sold to the parents of the, uh, lucky young man!” The auctioneer announced. When we got home and I was more relaxed, my dad dipped in some vegetable oil and I was able to slide my hand out, with my keychain of course.

I hoped the auctioneer would start with the paintings. The auction chose the vase as the first piece for sale. I tried desperately to get the keychain out. My hand was stuck. I leaned on the railing while enjoying my snacks. I stood in the middle of an art gallery with my hand stuck in the vase. I pulled a pack of mints from my pocket. I pulled out my keychain as well, which dropped inside a vase. An _________ DayUnlucky Unluckily,

an unlucky day a lucky young man The big contrast( 对比 ) in the story achieves a tone of ____________________ humor/fun/amusement

* use different structures （结构） * use transitional words （过渡） * add some details （细节） 1 * list the possible steps （过程） * put them in an order （顺序） * given two sentences （段首语） * main plots of the passage （故事情节） Step3 polish （润色） Step 2 draft （拟稿） Step 1 read ( 阅读）

第二节：读后续写（满分 25 分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一 个完整的故事。 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 若词数少于 130 ，从总分中扣去 2 分。 Basic requirements on “how to complete a story”: Based on the main plots( 情节 ) of the passage and 2 given sentences, you should write 2 paras which consist of about 150 words(including at least 5 underlined words). Your writing should be coherent/reasonable.