COMMENTARY LL2 - Coursework. Assessment Objectives Below is the breakdown of how many marks you get for each Assessment Objective you meet: AO1: Select.

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COMMENTARY LL2 - Coursework

Assessment Objectives Below is the breakdown of how many marks you get for each Assessment Objective you meet: AO1: Select and apply relevant concepts and approaches from integrated linguistic and literary study, using appropriate terminology and accurate, coherent written expression [10] AO2: Demonstrate detailed critical understanding in analysing the ways in which structure, form and language shape meanings in a range of spoken and written texts [10] A03: Use integrated approaches to explore relationships between texts, analysing and evaluating the significance of contextual factors in their production and reception [20]

The Commentary is marked out of 40. The dominant AO is AO3, which accounts for half the marks for the commentary. A03: Use integrated approaches to explore relationships between texts, analysing and evaluating the significance of contextual factors in their production and reception [20] In order to get a grade A/B your commentary must meet the following criteria: Confident awareness and discussion of relationships between texts, making specific and productive connections. Sound, increasingly confident appreciation of contextual factors and their significance.

AN OVERVIEW OF CONTENTS AND STRUCTURE What should I include in the commentary?

AN OVERVIEW OF CONTENTS AND STRUCTURE What should I include in the introduction?

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Introduction: - A comparative overview of both pieces taking into account: - Style – article, short story, monologue etc - Audience - Purpose - Context - Linking theme

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Introduction: - Begin with a contextual overview for each piece as follows: Literary: - What features of your stimulus text influenced your writing? - style - content - themes - Is there anything else we need to know? Non-Literary: - What are some of the broader issues your piece deals with? - What kind of overall meaning were you trying to achieve? Remember to MAKE LINKS AND COMPARISONS between the two [A03]

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Although some students may wish to discuss the reasons for their choice of genre, they should be discouraged from spending too much time on this area. The primary focus of the commentary must be the discussion of their stylistic choices. The main focus in the commentary should be an analysis of the student’s own writing not the text they have read. It is not intended that students compare their own writing to the stimulus text. Students should be reminded that brief reference to their stimulus material and its influence on their own writing should be included in the introduction.

You can make reference to your stimulus text here but remember not to say why you chose it.

TIPS AND TRICKS, DOS AND DON’TS. What should I include in the main body?

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Main Body: 6. The Commentary The purpose of the commentary is to allow students to discuss and evaluate the linguistic and stylistic choices they have made. It assesses candidates’ understanding of their choices of content, form, and style in both pieces of the original written work and their ability to make relevant points of comparison and contrast between the two pieces.

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Main Body: In their commentary students must: identify the literary and linguistic features they have employed discuss the impact of these features within their own writing show understanding of how different choices in language and form can create meaning through a comparison of the two pieces they have written

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Try using a more focused question for the commentary such as ‘Explore how a sense of place has been created’ or ‘Analyse how the theme of love/crime/religion has been presented.’ Don’t say ‘I’. Students provide very little analysis when they write ‘I used...’ and ‘I changed the word... to...’ The moderator is interested in HOW the words they have used create meaning.

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Rename your pieces Text A and Text B. It allows you to distance yourself from your writing. It makes the process much more objective and analytical. Specifically identify a term. Too many students are still quoting whole sentences without specifically highlighting the term they refer to.

Think of your commentary like any other essay. In the drafting process of the commentaries, highlight the number of different terms you have used. This is a good exercise to get you to focus on your use of terminology and many students who claim they have used a wide range of terminology are often shocked to find that in reality they have only used a few different terms.

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Students need to provide a sensible discussion of features of their own writing, linking them to meaning and intended purpose. They need to focus on HOW they have created meaning in their own writing. Otherwise, the commentary just becomes a feature spotting exercise. The application of terminology must be purposeful. Use the SEA approach!

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Statement – identify the term Evidence – quote the example Analysis – discuss the impact of the identified feature. E.g. How does the language create meaning? How does the verb/modifier/sentence type create an impression

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Main Body: Producing two separate commentaries and then providing a couple of paragraphs comparing the two pieces at the end of the assignment is NOT advisable. If you are using the framework approach do so with caution – it does tend to lend itself more to descriptive responses. The use of separate heading, e.g. lexis, grammar, phonology, etc also tends to fragment the response. Also students take far too long to start analysing language and miss valuable opportunities to engage with meaning.

AN OVERVIEW OF CONTENTS AND STRUCTURE What order should I analyse my work in if I can’t use F.S.L.I.S.?

Think of your commentary like any other essay. Main Body: - Go on to analyse both pieces in relation to each other in the same way you would analyse a poem and its partner text. Remember to avoid limiting yourself to a F.S.L.I.S. model. Separate your work into chunks and use F.S.L.I.S. to analyse each of these sections in detail: Mood and atmosphere Action Characterisation Themes Tone Remember to MAKE LINKS AND COMPARISONS between the two [A03]