CET QYF 昂立峰会写作讲座 戚元方

一、四六级写作考题回顾. You should write at least 150 words based on the following outline given in Chinese. Directions: In this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of My View on... You should write at least 150 words based on the following outline given in Chinese.

2005 年至 2010 年的四级写作题目 考试年份考题类型 2005 年 12 月 Should the university campus be open to tourists? 阐述性议论文 2006 年 6 月 Should Students Selecting Their Lecturers? 阐述性议论文 2006 年 12 月 The Spring Festival Evening Get-Together 议论文 2007 年 6 月 Welcome to Our Club 应用文 ( 通知书 ) 2007 年 12 月 What Electives to Choose 阐述性议论文 2008 年 6 月 Recreational Activities 对比性议论文 2008 年 12 月 Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags 解释性议论文 2009 年 6 月 Free Admission to Museums? 解释性议论文 2009 年 12 月 Creating a Green Campus 解释性议论文 2010 年 6 月 Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling 解释性议论文 2010 年 12 月 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 解释性议论文

2006 年至 2010 年的六级写作题目 考试时间考题类型 2006 年 6 月 Number of people in City X Traveling 图表描述 + 议论 2006 年 12 月 The Importance of Reading Classics 解释性议论文 2007 年 6 月 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? 阐述性议论文 2007 年 12 月 Digital Age 解释性议论文 2008 年 6 月 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 阐述性议论文 2008 年 12 月 How to Improve Students’ Mental Health 议论文 2009 年 6 月 On the Importance of a Name 阐述性议论文 2009 年 12 月 Should parents send their kids to art classes? 阐述性议论文 2010 年 6 月 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese 解释性议论文 2010 年 12 月 My View on University Ranking 阐述性议论文

2010 年 6 和 12 月四级写作 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following topic. You should write at least 150 words. Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中 不重视拼写 2. 出现这个现象的原因是 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办 一切 2. 为了让孩子独立, 父母应 该 ……

2010 年 6 和 12 月六级写作 You should write at least 150 words based on the following outline given in Chinese. Directions: Write a short essay on the following topic. You should write at least 150 words based on the following outline given in Chinese. Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese 1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽 视中文学习的现象； 2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果 3. 针对这种现象，我认为 … My View on University Ranking 1. 目前高校排名相当盛行 2. 对于这种做法人们看法 不一 3. 在我看来 ……

二、四六级写作题材预测 1.Essay to discuss （解释性议论文） reasons, effects, importance ， comment and suggestions 2.Essay to argue （阐述性议论文） argue for A or B argue for yes or No 3.Essay to compare ( 对比性议论文 ) benefits and drawbacks

解释性议论文 Directions: Write a short essay entitled “How to Communicate Efficiently” based on the following outlines given in Chinese with no less than 150 words. 1. 当前不少大学生不擅长沟通 2. 沟通的重要性 3. 如何进行有效沟通

Phenomenon No one will fail to notice the fact that nowadays quite a few college students are not good at communication. A characteristic of such a phenomenon is that some of them would rather isolate themselves at home than communicate with others in public places. This essay is to discuss the importance of communication and strategies we may adopt to help students to communicate efficiency.

How to write phenomenon 1. It is true that + 中文提示翻译 It is indeed the case that + No one will fail to notice the fact that + 2. A survey reveals that + 数据 A characteristic of such phenomenon is that + 现象 3. What are some of the factors involved and what action we should take to cope with + 问题 This essay is to discuss the importance of + 话题 and offer my view on this issue.

Importance The importance of communication among people cannot be overstated. We are social animals and the quality of our life depends on how much we can get help from others. Naturally, such kind of help first comes with communication. For example, parents need to communicate with their children to show their love; a teacher needs to communicate with students to convey knowledge and a businessman needs to communicate with his partners to make fortune. Communication is here and there and without it life is hard to imagine.

Importance ； reason ； effects 1.This phenomenon (importance; preference, change …) can be accounted for by a couple of factors, both individual and social (both inherited and environmental). For one thing + 理由一 （重 要性一 ). For another + 理由二（重要性二）. Above all + 理由三（重要性三）. 2.The effects of + 话题 lie in several ways. First, (on individual) Besides, (on family) Moreover (on society)

Suggestions So, how to communicate efficiently? It requires self- confidence, good articulation and knowledge of effective communication. First, you may organize and clarify ideas in your mind before communication. Besides, using appropriate body languages is sometimes necessary. Moreover, being good listeners and paying special attention to feedbacks are especially crucial to effective communication. All in all a win-win communication needs your efforts and dedication.

Suggestion or solution Reversing this trend needs time and dedication. One way we should take into account is + 解决方法 一. Another way to be considered is + 解决方法二. The best way to deal with + 问题 depends on 解决方 法三. Only in this way can we + 点题

Directions: Write a composition on the topic “Should Chinese Need Those New Words?”. You should write at least 150 words, based on the outline given in Chinese below. 1. 近年来中文中出现了大量的新词 ( 如：杯具， xx 族等 ) 2. 社会各界对此有不同的看法。 3. 我的立场。 阐述性议论文 杯具 or 悲剧

Nowadays a disturbing controversy has caused considerable concern as to whether Chinese should adopt some new words or expressions such as tragedy ( 杯具 ) and xx zu. Although there is no consensus of opinions among people on this issue, it is necessary to have a close look at both sides of the view before we arrive at a conclusion. (57 words) 现象

Some people hold new words and expressions are being coined by the minute, especially on the Internet, and they can become obsolete. Many of us have never heard things like “xx zu”. What’s the use of making such an expression official? This will only cause confusion when people communicate. Others, however, argue that the change of language is inevitable. Some expressions are new to us, but they will certainly be accepted by people gradually. One case in point is the expression “zhui xing zu”, which has now become a common expression for those who take celebrities as models to follow. 不同的观点

How to write different views People’s responses to + vary widely. Those who are positive about this phenomenon (matter; opinion …) argue that + 观点一. Besides,+ 观点二. Others, however, contradict this opinion. In their eyes, + 观点一. In addition, + 观点二

 Personally, language is a living organism. it is useless to try to stop language from changing. Just look at how different modern Chinese is from classical texts. New things and new situations emerge, and there has to be new language to describe them. Besides, there are ways we can maintain the beauty and purity of our national language while constantly updating it. Of course, certain slang words and expression that are deemed by most as vulgar can be discouraged, but other useful new elements should be maintained. 我的观点

Directions: In this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled “The Two Sides of Online games” with no less than 150 words based on the following outline given in Chinese. 1. 现在有一些大学生沉迷 于网路游戏 2. 网路游戏好处和可能产 生的副作用 3. 我对此看法是 …… 对比性议论文 种菜 online

As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. A recent survey reveals the time an average student spends on these games is about two hours a day. However, as is the case with many issues, online games have both positive and negative aspects. 现象

On the positive side, online games can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. They can also stimulate students’ interest in computer science. Besides, they can release college students’ study pressures and make their campus life more enjoyable. On the negative side, if students are indulged in the games, their mental health will be affected. In addition, online games are time- consuming, if students spend too much time on these games, there will be no time for their academic study. 利弊

In my opinion, online games may refresh our minds and bring us certain pleasure when we are tired of studies. But we should have a strong self-control and play the games only when we have finished our study tasks. If we play them in the right way, we might benefit a lot from them. But if we are addicted to them, we might harvest great sorrows. 我的观点

三、如何在四六级写作中得分 1. 肯定不如双否好 —— All the people will notice the fact that health has its priority. —— No one will fail to notice the fact that health has its priority. （双否） 几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响。 —— There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake. （双否）

2. 陈述不如倒装妙 —— I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装，用否定词开头 —— Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。 其他的否定词，如： —— The youth unemployment is the most serious problem. —— Nothing is more serious than the problem of the youth unemployment. 如何在四六级写作中得分

3. 主动不如被动巧 —— We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days. 这句话如果写成： —— At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days ，分数会更高。 —— This preference can be accounted for by a couple of factors, both individual and social. 如何在四六级写作中得分

4. 分词结构不能少 If such is the case, you should apologize to her Such being the case, you should apologize to her. —— A mobile phone which is small in size, light in weight and easy to carry offers fast and convenient service for the world’s communication. —— A mobile phone, being small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offers fast and convenient service for the world’s communication. 如何在四六级写作中得分

5. 并列不如复合爽 —— There are six students in the room and two of them are from the United Kingdom. —— There are six students in the room, of whom two are from the United Kingdom. —— We don’t need more cars but cars with more people. —— What we need is not more cars but cars with more people. 如何在四六级写作中得分

6. 介宾结构不能忘 —— The government injects funds into the job market and creates lots of job opportunities. —— The government creates lots of job opportunities by injecting funds into the job market. —— With the advent of the Internet, online shopping has now become available to consumers. —— By this, people can have easy access to a variety of goods they want. 如何在四六级写作中得分

总之，在写作考试中我们要做到： 1. drafting （理清思路，构建框架，列出观点） 2. writing （不犯语法错误，注意逻辑和修辞，发展 充分） 3. revising （一看语法，二看连词，三看修辞） 如何在四六级写作中得分