作文讲评 — 看图说话 --being late for school

 请根据下列四幅图, 用第一人称叙述今天 早晨你上学迟到的经过, 可加合理想象.  词数 : 120 左右 05 年毕业考 --- 看图说话

审题  体裁 :  人称 :  时态 :  结构要点 : 记叙 第一 过去 Pic. 1 Pic. 2 Pic. 3 Pic. 4 find sth. wrong with the bike find many people at the station keep looking at my watch hurry to school Step 1 : Read behind the pictures, catching the main idea

Pic. 1 Pic. 2 Pic. 3 Pic. 4 find sth. wrong with the bike find many people at the station keep looking at my watch hurry to school Step 2: Link the story up, adding necessary details. decide to take a bus, rush to the stop wait a long time, get on the bus the bus moved slowly, afraid of being late find I was late for school

Pic. 1 find sth. wrong with the bike decide to take a bus, rush to the stop Step 3: Joining the main ideas together, using proper phrases or patterns. The beginning What an unlucky day today was! This morning, I was late for school! This morning, I went to school as usual. When I was about to ride on my bike, I surprisingly found my bike had a flat tyre.

Pic. 1 Pic. 2 find sth. wrong with the bike find many people on the station Step 1 : Read behind the pictures, catching the main idea Step 2: Link the story up, adding necessary details. decide to take a bus, rush to the stop wait a long time, get on the bus Step 3: Joining the main ideas together, using proper phrases or patterns. As there was not enough time for me to get it repaired, I decided to take a bus instead. When I hurried / rushed to the bus station, I found there were too many people waiting for the bus./ I hurried to…, only to find a long queue of people waiting

Pic. 2 Pic. 3 find many people on the station keep looking at my watch Step 1 : Read behind the pictures, catching the main idea Step 2: Link the story up, adding necessary details. wait a long time, get on the bus the bus moved slowly, afraid of… I had waited for nearly 20 minutes before one bus came. / nearly 20 minutes passed before…. I pushed my way onto the bus. The bus moved slowly as there were so many cars and buses. Step 3: Joining the main ideas together, using proper phrases or patterns. Having waited for half an hour, I finally got on the bus. It began to move slowly. What’s worse, the traffic was held up for 10 minutes.

Pic. 3 Pic. 4 keep looking at my watch hurry to school Step 1 : Read behind the pictures, catching the main idea Step 2: Link the story up, adding necessary details. the bus moved slowly, afraid of being late find I was late for school Step 3: Joining the main ideas together, using proper phrases or patterns. I was so anxious that I kept looking at my watch again and again, but it didn’t help. Afraid of being late for school, I kept looking at watch again and again, hoping that it could run quickly.

Pic. 4 hurry to school Step 1 : Read behind the pictures, catching the main idea Step 2: Link the story up, adding necessary details. find I was late for school Step 3: Joining the main ideas together, using proper phrases or patterns. When I hurried to school, it was already 7:55. I was 20 minutes late for school!

 This morning, I went to school as usual. When I was about to ride on my bike, I surprisingly found that my bike had a flat tyre. As there was not enough time for me to get it repaired, I decided to take a bus instead. When I rushed to the bus station, I found there were too many people waiting for it. I had no choice but to wait. Nearly 20 minutes had passed before one bus came. I pushed my way onto the bus. It moved slowly as there were so many cars and buses. Afraid of being late for school, I kept looking at my watch again and again, but it didn’t help. When I hurried to school, it was already 7:55. I was 20 minutes late!(130 words)