Student 3 (FL) Post- Feedback Tasks: 30 mins Richard Galletly, Aston University

Student needs Writing introductions …and conclusions In- text referencing Logical division – describing different theories and reaching a conclusion Formal language used in academic writing – not referring to the reader as ‘you’ Giving your own opinion in essays? When to and when not to

Introduction/ conclusion Introductory paragraphs: Oshima, 2006 p57-63 Conclusion paragraphs: Oshima, 2006 p72- 77

In text referencing Quotations: Oshima, 2006 p The great big referencing quiz: Tissington, 2009 p71-

Logical division What logical division is and why it is important: Fitzpatrick, 2011 p49-59 Logical division: Oshima, 2006 p64-71

Formal language used in academic writing Formal language: Swales, 2007 p18 Academic style: Bailey, 2011 p

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References II Hewings, M. (2005). Advanced Grammar in Use. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. McMillan, K. & Weyers, J. (2010). How to write essays and assignments. Harlow: Pearson Education Ltd. Murphy, R. (2004). English Grammar in Use. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. Oshima, A. & Hogue, A. (2006). Writing Academic English: level 4. NY: Pearson Education. Reinders, H., Moore, N. & Lewis, M. (2008). The International Student Handbook. London: Palgrave Macmillan. Swales, J.M. & Feak, C.B. (2007). Academic Writing for Graduate Students. Michigan: The University of Michigan Press.

References III Swan, M. (2005). Practical English Usage. Oxford: Oxford University Press. Tissington, P., Hasel, M. & Matthiesen, J. (2009). How to Write Successful Business and Management Essays. London: Sage Publications Ltd.