IDEAS FOR PERSONAL STATEMENTS PD SPRING 2015. PURPOSE  PURPOSE: TO HAVE STUDENTS LEARN ABOUT PERSONAL STATEMENTS IN 9 TH & 10 TH GRADE SO THAT WHEN THEY.

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IDEAS FOR PERSONAL STATEMENTS PD SPRING 2015

PURPOSE  PURPOSE: TO HAVE STUDENTS LEARN ABOUT PERSONAL STATEMENTS IN 9 TH & 10 TH GRADE SO THAT WHEN THEY ARRIVE TO 11 TH & 12 TH GRADES, THEY AREN’T TOTALLY SURPRISED.  THERE ARE TWO PROMPTS THAT STUDENTS SHOULD BE ANSWERING. STUDENTS NEED TO ANSWER BOTH.

PROMPTS  DESCRIBE THE WORLD YOU COME FROM- FOR EXAMPLE, YOUR FAMILY, COMMUNITY OR SCHOOL - & TELL US HOW YOUR WORLD HAS SHAPED YOUR DREAMS & ASIPIRATIONS.  TELL US ABOUT A PERSONAL QUALITY, TALENT, ACCOMPLISHMENT, CONTRIBUTION, OR EXPERIENCE THAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. WHAT ABOUT THIS QUALITY OR ACCOMPLISHMENT MAKES YOU PROUD & HOW DOES IT RELATE TO THE PERSON YOU ARE?

IDEAS  HAVE STUDENTS WRITE SEVERAL DRAFTS & DO PEER REVIEWS OF THE DRAFTS (IF STUDENTS ARE COMFORTABLE WITH THIS)  HAVE STUDENTS DIAGRAM THEIR ENTIRE BACKGROUND  GRADES, AWARDS, AWARDS, ACTIVITIES, WORK EXPERIENCE, FAMILY, INCOME, NEIGHBORHOOD ISSUES, ETC.  ARE YOU THE 1 ST IN YOUR FAMILY TO GO TO COLLEGE? ARE YOU THE 1 ST YOUR FAMILY TO LIVE IN THE US? WHAT ABOUT YOUR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT OR ACADEMIC ACHIEVEMENT?  VIDEO PROVIDED IN LESSON PLAN  ?v=iB4O2UXdLo0 ?v=iB4O2UXdLo0  REVIEW GOOD EXAMPLES OF PERSONAL STATEMENTS  to-schools/personal- statements/samples.html to-schools/personal- statements/samples.html  wl/resource/642/02 wl/resource/642/02

DOCUMENTS  COUNSELING OFFICE  HAVE STUDENTS WRITE DOWN QUESTIONS FOR COUNSELING STAFF.  COUNSELING STAFF WILL STOP BY ON TUESDAYS TO ANSWER THOSE QUESTIONS  FULFILLMENT FUND DOCUMENTS/ARTICLES

FOR MORE HELP…  a.edu/how-to-apply/personal- statement/ a.edu/how-to-apply/personal- statement/