Once again, it is your job to catch all the errors. If you do, you’ll get 25 points, if you don’t, it’s bad news bears.

GGive your peer grade your SO and Checklist. PPlace your (peer grader) name/date on the SO Checklist. CCorrect each error with a h hh highlighter and short written explanation of the error. For instance: If punctuation is missing, use your highlighter to mark that entry and write “punct” in the margin. Let them make the correction….you simply point out that something is wrong.

Jones 1 Check for pagination: Does the page number change for each page?

I. Introduction – No sentence. II. Body – no sentence (erase sample words) III. Conclusion – no sentence Is this formatted and labeled correctly?

Header: Check for accuracy. Sally Brown/B2 Mrs. Priestap Research/Sentence Outline April 15, 2011

Is there a centered title? (no bolding or underline) Sentence Outline

 Quickly scan the entire document.  Are there any extra spaces between entries, at the top of the page or on the works cited page?  Does the “unify spacing” box need to be checked in the paragraph prompt?

Do a quick scan.  One sentence is allowed for each entry.  Each sentence need a Noun/Verb – no phrases.  No questions

 The Thesis Statement must be underlined in the intro.

1. Each sub-topic in the intro is written as a declarative sentence 2. Each sub-topic is copied and pasted in the same order in the body.

Do a quick scan.  Each entry in the body is written as one sentence only.

 Each entry has a signal phrase.  Each source is introduced with a first signal phrase  Every other time that source is used, a second signal phrase is used. sweet  …..uses a variety of sweet verbs.

 “Everything is great” (“All Children are Great” 4).  Did your writer include a credential….who the heck is this person?  Variety in second signal phrases….beginning, embedded, tagged.  Everything is great, says Yost, with the community (33).  Everything is great with the community, insists Yost (33).

 Each Subtopic includes both Paraphrases Quotations

Each Subtopic section contains at least two different sources.

A. Restates Thesis in a new, powerful, & urgent way. B. Solutions in one sentence or sub-categories C. End is powerful and conclusive.

 As you read the outline, place a tiny check mark to the left of that source on the Works Cited Page when you see that source cited. MUST match HANGING INDENT.  The in-text citation MUST match the name or title in the HANGING INDENT.  If there are sources listed on the Works Cited page that are not found in the sentence outline, highlight that source.

As you read your writer’s paper, highlight any errors in:  Spelling  Punctuation  Awkward/wordy sentences  First/Second person  Past Tense Verbs

 AWK  AWK - Awkward wording or phrases  1 or 2  1 or 2 – First of second person  GEN  GEN – Generalities like, “all” or “everyone” or “all around the world.”  WC  WC – Word Choice  WW – Wrong Word  Cliché or Slang-  Cliché or Slang- Informal language or “sayings.”

 See Checklist for instructions.  Consult/Converse with your peer grader about what your impressions about their research and if their outline “lines it up” logically and clearly.  Count up the errors, write the amount above the writer’s name on the checklist and circle it. Hand it back. It’s time to revise.

YYou will have one whole class period to revise and correct all the errors your peer grader found.  You MUST correct each highlighted correction. IIf you change the order of your subtopics, give attention to your 1 st & 2 nd sig. phrases. IIt’s NOT ok if you haven’t revised the highlighted correction.  I will count it as two full points. Blimey!!

FFollow these instructions to receive: 1 FREE bonus point!! PAPER CLIP THE WHOLE DANG THING TOGETHER 1. Place it in the blue basket in this order: RRubric (your name on top) NNew Version w/Works Cited Page CChecklist OOld (corrected version) Don’t remove staple. 2. Check off your name on the class roster. 3. Triple Save!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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