UNIT 5 SEMINAR: The Unit 5 Project - Outline of an Informative Essay

G OAL : The goal of this presentation is to help students understand fully the parts of the outline project for Unit 5. The outline is the basis for the informative essay each student will write for Unit 9. One purpose of the outline is to determine how outside sources will fit into your paragraphs.

Q UESTION : W HAT IS THE OUTLINE AND HOW SHOULD IT WORK ? We use an outline because it provides the structure we need to create an organized essay. Although our writing can use creativity, the essay that the outline will help you write is not creative writing. It is informative writing based on ideas and facts.

STEP 1: REVIEW UNIT MATERIALS. Review “Reading.” Visit links. Get the “big picture” of the outline. Be sure you have chosen the topic for the outline from the list in Unit 1. Access the articles for your topic as listed in the Unit materials under the topic choices. The articles are in the Library.

STEP 2: USE MAGGIE DURHAM’S EXAMPLE OUTLINE. In fact, you can use Maggie’s work as a template. Save her outline as a Word document and type over her work to be sure you have the right format. Pay close attention to presentation items such as punctuation and spacing.

STEP 3: UNDERSTAND MAGGIE’S OUTLINE The first level of Maggie’s outline is her introduction. She uses Roman numerals to divide her outline. The introduction is Roman numeral “I.” A = Her attention-engaging technique (filmmaker analogy) B = Her topic background C = Her specific thesis sentence (topic + key points = thesis sentence). Note: If Maggie does not cite an item in her outline as being from an outside source, it is her own idea.

STEP 4: UNDERSTAND MAGGIE’S USE OF SOURCES If Maggie has already written draft body paragraphs (as we saw sampled in Unit 3), the primary purpose of her outline is to plan how outside sources fit with her own ideas. Therefore, Maggie can use her topic sentences (from the Unit 3 Project ) at the Roman numeral levels II- IV and follow these topic sentences with source paraphrase and quotation that support her topic sentences (A, B, C, etc.). Keep in mind that Maggie is not going to string together a series of sources and expect this to be an essay. She will use her own ideas and use outside sources to support her ideas. The outline is a plan for this process.

S TEP 5: U NDERSTAND THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN PARAPHRASE AND QUOTATION. Again, a paraphrase occurs when the writer uses his or her own words to express the ideas of a source. Direct quotation occurs when a writer copies the exact words of a source. One should use more paraphrase than direct quotation, but sometimes we just cannot say it better than the original source.

S TEP 6: U NDERSTAND APA IN - TEXT CITATION FOR PARAPHRASE. When a writer paraphrases, he or she cites the author and year of the source. Examples: *Mary Smith (2005) indicates that young voters may feel disconnected from political issues. *A recent study indicates that young voters may feel disconnected from political issues (Smith, 2005). *In 2005, Mary Smith’s study of young voters indicated that these voters may feel disconnected from political issues. Note: In the third example, there are no parentheses because all the information needed for this paraphrase is in the text of the sentence.

S TEP 7: U NDERSTAND APA IN - TEXT CITATION FOR DIRECT QUOTATION. When a writer quotes directly, he or she will include a page number when one is available. Not all sources have page numbers. Examples: Mary Smith (2005) points out that “most kids simply are not involved in the typical voting agenda” (p. 25). A recent study suggests that “most kids simply are not involved in the typical voting agenda” (Smith, 2005, p. 25). In her 2005 study, Mary Smith suggests that “most kids simply are not involved in the typical political agenda” (p. 25). Note: These examples are all ways of handling the same quotation. Notice that these examples and Maggie’s examples integrate quotation into the writer’s own sentences. No quotation should stand alone as its own sentence.

S TEP 8: C OMBINE YOUR OWN IDEAS AND RESEARCH FINDINGS. This point is worth repeating: Maggie began this essay with her own ideas and sentences. Research supports Maggie’s ideas and gives her new perspectives from which to write, but the essay is Maggie’s work based on her research. Outside sources are important, but we cannot string them together and call them an essay. Her sources are cited. Non-cited material is Maggie's own. In the body-paragraph levels of the outline, the sub-points (A, B, C, etc.) include citation because Maggie is going to use these to decide how to support her ideas with her research.

STEP 9: UNDERSTAND MAGGIE’S CONCLUSION FORMAT. Roman numeral “V” represents the conclusion paragraph. A = Restatement of the thesis sentence in brief B = Wrap up of significant ideas associated with the thesis key points C = Circle back to the attention-capturing technique of the introduction

S TEP 10: P AY CAREFUL ATTENTION TO DETAIL. The References Page has a specific spacing and indentation format. Copy this format exactly. Use the APA resources in Unit 4 to find out what every item in the reference entry means.

STEP 11: ASK QUESTIONS! The outline is a detailed project. Read the instructions for the project. Are there any rules you might have overlooked? Are there specific requirements for the sources from which you will borrow information? Use the rubric as a checklist for the project. Use the Kaplan Writing Center’s help. Ask your instructor for help. Leave time to ask questions by beginning work early in the Unit.

S OME REMINDERS... Read, print, and read at least two more times. Begin immediately; don’t let one minute go to waste. Set a personal plan for completing the outline and submitting it by your own due date and time. Do not use 11:59 PM ET on the Tuesday night the outline is due as a due date. Work ahead. Pat yourself on the back for a job well done!

A STEP AT A TIME... Learning to outline and use APA requires patience, practice, and time- management. Consider the rules for the sources you are using. Do not try to learn all the rules at one time. If you take these issues a step at a time, you will learn with practice. We often learn from making mistakes; do your best and seek help when you need it.

LOOKING AHEAD In Unit 6 we will: Look at in-text citation Focus on integrating information from a source into a paragraph.

PARALLELISM (PAGES )

PARALLELISM ( ) 1) Sports benefit your overall health because they relieve stress in your muscles, they work your cardio vascular system, and your brain needs oxygen. 2) Every student should complete high school because high school graduates earn more, finding better jobs, and they have more choices. 3) Jonas’ character in Lois Lowry’s novel The Giver is brave in many situations, skeptical about his community, and chooses his words carefully.

THESIS CHECKPOINT Is it an idea? Does it state, in a complete sentence, an assertion ? As clearly and succinctly as possible, restate the idea and the assertion here. Does it answer a question that is really at issue for the audience? Discuss why you think the audience will want to know about your thesis—what issue does it clarify or question does it answer?

THESIS CHECKPOINT Does the thesis say exactly what I mean? Are the terms I use precise and clear? Write down the key words in your thesis and then discuss whether those are precise and clear. Can it be developed reasonably? After re- reading your thesis, predict what the essay will be about in as much detail as you can just from the promise of the thesis.

BLUPRINT THESIS A BLUEPRINT THESIS STATEMENT contains the main ideas of the essay. This statement is a single sentence found at the end of the introductory paragraph. The blueprint thesis statement is an essential part of writing because it: *tells what the subject of the essay will be *suggests the organizational pattern of the essay *establishes a tone for the rest of the essay *contains two parts: a SUBJECT and an OPINION (or POSITION) A quality blueprint thesis statement will include 3 ideas to support your opinion. These ideas will let the reader know what you will be discussing in the essay. Try this example of a blueprint thesis statement: Cesar Chavez High School is the best school in Arizona because of its quality education, caring teachers and abundant sports programs.

BLUEPRINT THESIS Easy structure

Let’s try these samples

PARALLEL THESIS STATEMENTS Fix the following thesis statements so that they become parallel: Graduating from high school is important because it prepares you for the real world, proves your capability and graduates get better jobs. (verbs at beginning of phrases) The fair is an exciting place to visit because of the rides, food and it is fun. (nouns) Bike riding is an excellent source of exercise because it is easy to do, exciting and healthy. (adjectives)

PARALLELISM (PART 2) Jiffy Motors is the best repair shop because your car will be fixed quickly, efficiently and in a dependable manner. (adverbs) The Alaskan Nature Reserve should be preserved because of its unique wildlife, its intoxicating beauty and its campsites (phrase)