Item 1 You use to live in new york tricia, did you ever see the plaza hotel. Corrected You used to live in New York, Tricia. Did you ever see the Plaza Hotel?

Item 2 Mimsey don’t want to come out of the bathroom she don’t want to get marryed. Corrected Mimsey doesn’t want to come out of the bathroom because she doesn’t want to get married.

Item 3 The Father Roy seem to rise his voice quite often. Corrected The father, Roy, seems to raise his voice quite often.

Item 4 Neither the parents nor the daughter remain calm cool and collected in that scene. Corrected Neither the parents nor the daughter remains calm, cool, and collected in that scene.

Item 5 Shakespeares play Romeo And Juliet is one of the most famousest of the great bards tragedys. Corrected Shakespeare’s play Romeo and Juliet is one of the most famous of the great bard’s tragedies.

Item 6 Its about two young people whom get married secret. Corrected It’s about two young people who get married secretly.

Item 7 at the begining of the play romeo is seriously depressed about love Corrected At the beginning of the play, Romeo is seriously depressed about love.

Item 8 As soon as romeo meets juliet he forgot about the girl who he loved before. Corrected As soon as Romeo meets Juliet, he forgets about the girl whom he loved before.

Item 9 i laughed out loud when i had read the exchange between Peter and the musicians in act IV David reported. Corrected “I laughed out loud when I read the exchange between Peter and the musicians in Act IV,” David reported. (had deleted)

Item 10 “At the same time, he continued I was also feelling tense about what might happen next. Corrected “At the same time,” he continued, “I was also feeling tense about what might happen next.”

Item 11 in a tragedy the main character always have a tragic flaw Corrected In a tragedy the main character always has a tragic flaw.

Item 12 Both Romeo and Juliet is to impatient to wait to get married. Corrected Both Romeo and Juliet are too impatient to wait to get married.

Item 13 Make alot of rash decisions. Corrected They make a lot of rash decisions. (sentence revised)

Item 14 Doesn’t it seem like Romeo love Juliet more then he love life itself. Corrected Doesn’t it seem as though Romeo loves Juliet more than he loves life itself?