CS300: MOVIE REVIEW BY AVINASH KUMAR GROUP NO. :
ERRORS: 1. DIDN'T INCLUDE CASTS THAT THE ACTOR PLAYS AND HOW IT IS DIFFERENT FROM OTHER BOLLYWOOD MOVIES.
2. REPETITION OF INFORMATION. EX-AJAY PORTRAYS A CHARACTER OF COMMON MIDDLE CLASS MAN AND IN THE VERY NEXT LINE I INCLUDE THE STORY IS ABOUT A MIDDLE-CLASS FAMILY.
3. LENGTHY SENTENCES. PUT TOO MUCH INFORMATION INTO A SINGLE LINE. EG-HE RELATES HIS DAILY LIFE PROBLEM WITH THE MOVIES AND DEALS WITH THEM ACCORDINGLY IN THE FAVOUR OF HIM AND HIS FAMILY.
4. LOT OF GRAMMATICAL ERRORS.
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