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INTRODUCTION The introduction comes at the start of a piece of writing. It introduces the research by situating it (by giving background), presenting the research problem and saying how and why this problem will be "solved." Without this important information the reader cannot easily understand the more detailed information about the research that comes later. It also explains why the research is being done (rationale) which is crucial for the reader to understand the significance of the study.

Introduction: Content and flow Background include motivation Rationale/justification Problem Statement Objectives Scope State major result and principle conclusions Structure Organization

PURPOSE OF THE INTRODUCTION? What is the context of this problem? In what situation or environment can this problem be observed? (Background) Why is this research important? Who will benefit? Why do we need to know this? Why does this situation, method, model or piece of equipment need to be improved? (Rationale/justification) What is it we don’t know? What is the gap in our knowledge this research will fill? What needs to be improved? (Problem Statement) What steps will the researcher take to try and fill this gap or improve the situation? (Objectives) Is there any aspect of the problem the researcher will not discuss? Is the study limited to a specific geographical area or to only certain aspects of the situation? (Scope)

INTRODUCTION COMMON PROBLEMS    Too much detail, and hence too long. Remember, this is the introduction, a kind of overview. Although you will cover important points, detailed descriptions of method, study site and results will be in later sections. Look at the proportion of a research study an introduction takes up. Notice it is comparatively short because it serves as a summary of what follows. Repetition of words, phrases or ideas. You will have keywords that are crucial to your study.  However, your reader doesn't want to read them over and over! A high level of repetition makes your writing look careless. To reduce it, highlight repeated words or phrases - then you can easily judge if you are overusing them and find synonyms or pronouns to replace them.

   Unclear problem definition. Without a clear definition of your research problem, your reader is left with no clear idea of what you were studying. This means that they cannot judge your work's relevance to their own work, or its usefulness, quality, etc. As an exercise, you should be able to complete a sentence that starts, "The purpose of this study is . . . " that encapsulates the problem you are investigating.   You should also ensure that your research problem matches the title of your paper (you'd be surprised how many don't !) as well as its methodology and objectives. Poor organization. Writing an introduction that effectively introduces your research problem and encapsulates your study is not an easy task. Often when we write we discover gradually what we want to say and how we want to say it. Your introduction must have a logical sequence that your reader can follow easily. COMMON PROBLEMS

A SCHEMA FOR INTRODUCTIONS Establish the Field – general to specific, previous research Define a research problem – gap or questions or previous inquiry Propose a Solution – outlining purpose, announcing present research, announcing principle findings, benefits

Field General to specific: Most writing starts with general information and then moves to specific information. This is true of introductions too.

Field General to specific: For example: … This prompted keen interest in automated data analysis tools, that in turn, catapulted the rise of data mining. However, data mining process with the current data structure having a computationally-intensive process i.e. NP-complete. We focus on Association Rule Mining (ARM) because of its immense popularity and usefulness in a wide variety of situations such as e-commerce, classification, clustering, web-mining, and bioinformatics. Several data structures have been proposed for the enhancement of ARM, but none is able to cope effectively with the size and dynamism of current database.

Explaination    The first sentence: This prompted keen interest in automated data analysis tools, that in turn, catapulted the rise of data mining. (general). The second sentence: However, data mining process with the current data structure having a computationally-intensive process i.e. NP-complete. (less general). The third sentence: We focus on Association Rule Mining (ARM) because of its immense popularity and usefulness in a wide variety of situations (more specific). The fourth sentence:   Several data structures have been proposed for the enhancement of ARM, but none is able to cope effectively with the size and dynamism of current database. (yet more specific). Field

Field Previous research: Often the introduction will refer to work already done in the research area in order to provide background (and often also to help define the research problem). For example: Several data structures have been proposed for the enhancement of the ARM, but none is able to cope effectively with the size and dynamism of current databases [9-14].

Define research problem Your research must be new in some way.  It must add knowledge to your field so you need to show in what way your work explores an area/issue/question that has previously not been explored, or not been explored in detail, in not explored in the way that you are going to use. In other words, you need to give a rationale for your work (i.e. show the reasons for doing it). There are four ways to demonstrate that you are adding to the knowledge in your field: [gap or questions or previous inquiry or counter claiming]

Define research problem Gap: A research gap is an area where no or little research has been carried out. This is shown by outlining the work already done to show where there is a gap in the research (which you will then fill with your research). For example: The structures that had been proposed for mining the data were not able to cope effectively with the size and dynamism of current databases.

Define research problem Raising a question: The research problem is defined by asking a question to which the answer is unknown, and which you will explore in your research. For example: *Can one develop a method that may avoid candidate generation-and-test and utilize some novel data structures to reduce the cost in frequent-pattern mining? This is the motivation of this study.[Han et al. 2004] * JiaWei Han et al. “Mining Frequent Patterns Without Candidate generation: A Frequent- Pattern Tree Approach”, Data Mining and Knowledge Discovery, 8, 53-87, 2004

Define research problem Continuing a previously developed line of enquiry: Building on work already done, but taking it further (by using a new sample, extending the area studied, taking more factors into consideration, taking fewer factors into consideration, etc.). For example: Taking all these elements and their possible variations into account is often far too complex and tedious for determining efficient gas development patterns with simple back of the envelope calculations. In their survey of these elements, Julius and Mashayeki [8] present a detailed analysis of these different interactions. They suggest that these be taken into account through gas planning models constructed in the same spirit as the planning models developed in the power generation sector. In this study, we present a gas planning model that fulfils some of the specifications established in Julius and Mashayeki [8]. (Boucher and Smeers, 1996) Define research problem

Define research problem Counter-claiming: A conflicting claim, theory or method is put forward.   Here, for example, the researchers argue that previous researchers' assessments of cost effectiveness/methodology were too complex, and that a simplified process could and should be used instead:

Propose a solution SOLUTION Once the field and problem have been defined, it is time to give the "solution." In other words, how will the research gap be filled? How will the question that was raised be answered? This last part of the introduction can also be used to show the benefits, to explain the objectives, to clarify the scope of the research, to announce what was found from doing the research and how it can be used.

Outlining purpose: Often researchers will described their objectives in their introduction in order for the reader to have a clear idea of what they set out to accomplish. Usually there is a general objective written in one sentence (details of more specific objectives can be given in following sentences). Example 1: In this paper, we focus on association rule mining because its immense popularity and usefulness….. Here we shall critically examine existing preprocessing data structures in ARM for enhancing performance in an attempt to understand their strengths and weaknesses. “Y.K. Woon et. al. IEEE Trans. On Knowledge and Data Engineering, pp 875-879, July 2004. ”          Propose a solution

Announcing present research (method): Important points about the methodology used are outlined, perhaps including the scope of the study. However, the methodology is not given in detail (since details are given in the methodology section). For example: Our analysis culminate in a practical structure called Support-Ordered Trie Itemset (SOTrieIT) and two synergetic AR mining algorithms to accompany it. Or This paper proposes a new model called Support-Ordered Trie Itemset (SOTrieIT) with synergistic ARM algorithms to improve the performance process. “Y.K. Woon et. al. IEEE Trans. On Knowledge and Data Engineering, pp 875-879, July 2004. ” Propose a solution

Propose a solution Announcing principle findings (results):  Researchers may indicate the kind of results they obtained, or an overall summary of their findings.  For example: It reveals that the performance of the model increases up to two orders of magnitude and, thus, verifying its efficiency and viability.

Propose a solution Example 2 [outlining purpose and announcing present research] In this study, we develop and integrate the following three techniques in order to solve this problem. First, a novel, compact data structure, called frequent-pattern tree, or FP-tree in short, is constructed, which is an extended prefix-tree structure storing crucial, quantitative information about frequent patterns. … Second, an FP-tree-based pattern-fragment growth mining method is developed, which starts from a frequent length-1 pattern (as an initial suffix pattern), examines only its … Third, the search technique employed …

Propose a solution Announcing principle findings (results): Our study shows that FP-growth is about an order of magnitude faster than Apriori, especially when the data set is dense (containing many patterns) and/or when the frequent patterns are long; also, FP-growth outperforms the TreeProjection algorithm. Moreover, our FP-tree-based mining method has been implemented in the DBMiner system and tested in large transaction databases in industrial applications. * JiaWei Han et al. “Mining Frequent Patterns Without Candidate generation: A Frequent- Pattern Tree Approach”, Data Mining and Knowledge Discovery, 8, 53-87, 2004

Propose a solution Indicating the structure of the research: It is useful to outline the organization of the written up research that follows so that the reader has a clear idea of what is going to follow, and in what order.

Propose a solution Indicating benefits of current research: Indicating the benefits of the research helps to justify why it was carried out and emphasizes the value of the study. For example: …..because of its immense popularity and usefulness in a wide variety of situations such as e-commence, classification, clustering, web mining, and bio-informatics.

Propose a solution Notice that the introduction includes information that is presented in other parts of the paper. Does this mean that if you indicate your results in your Introduction  that you will have nothing left to present in your Results chapter? No! Introductions literally "introduce" information to give an overview, often offering only a short summary because full details are given in later chapters.

BRIEF OF THE TECHNOLOGY Here you need to entice the readers; get them to take an interest in your research. Bring the reader from what is commonly understood to the point of appreciating the questions your research attempts to answer. Introduce the ideas that led to the present work. Pose the questions that the rest of the paper answers. Explain the possible applications. Keep in mind those who should be interested, but aren't yet, and what ideas may convince them.