TOEIC ESSAY WRITING EXERCISE 8 Coherence- the quality of forming a unified whole

Opinion Essay In this part of the test you will be asked to write an opinion essay in which you state, explain, and support reasons about your opinion. You will have 30 minutes to plan and write your essay. Leave a little time to proofread and edit your essay. Your essay should be 4-5 paragraphs in length. It will be rated in terms of organization, grammar, vocabulary, and coherence. Coherence- the quality of forming a unified whole

“Zoos are becoming facsimile - or perhaps caricatures– of how animals once were in their natural habitat. If the right policies toward nature were pursued, we would need no zoos at all”. This statement effectively states the truth about animal zoos. Give your views and opinions on the same. Should zoos be shut down? Facsimile- an exact copy, especially of written or printed material

Type your outline (5-10 minutes): 1 Type your outline (5-10 minutes): 1. Keeping animals in zoos is unethical. Do you agree? 2. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos. 3. Advantages and disadvantages of keeping animals in the zoos 4. Animals in captivity 5. Is it cruel to keep animals in cages? 6. Perception on zoo animals 7. Animals are better in zoos 8. A discussion about animals