Animal Farm chapter 7 L/O: W AF6: using accurate punctuation and grammar to write clear sentences

WALT and WILF What Are we Learning Today What I’m Looking For Interpreting characters and events in chapter 7 and developing an interpretation of Napoleon as a leader Writing a diary entry using accurate grammar and punctuation What I’m Looking For Grade C: Consistent accuracy with a range of punctuation Grade B: full range of punctuation marks used confidently and accurately Grade A: using punctuation to create a particular effect and add to the impact on the reader

Events in chapter 7 H E U X P T S A Napoleon orders an EX—U---- because he wanted to P-N--- the animals The first animal to be killed is a H-- All the animals have become U------ The animals suffer H---S--- at the hands of Napoleon The animals suffer from S--------N 6. Napoleon begins to T---- with the humans 7. The animals feel A---- towards Napoleon H E U X P T S A

Events in chapter 7 Can you see a possible solution to life on Animal Farm? (Grade A* question) Napoleon orders an EXECUTION because he wanted to PUNISH the animals The first animal to be killed is a HEN All the animals have become UNEQUAL The animals suffer HARDSHIP at the hands of Napoleon The animals suffer from STARVATION 6. Napoleon begins to TRADE with the humans 7. The animals feel ANGER towards Napoleon H E U A X N R D C Q S P T V I O L G

How does life on Animal Farm in Chapter 7 compare to the life the animals lived in Chapter 3? (grade B question) What’s the famous quote that connects this image to a certain character in the novel?

Who said the following in chapter 7? ‘I would not believe that such things could happen on our farm’ ‘Fools! Fools! Fools! Do you not see what is written on the side of the van’ ‘Snowball was Jones’s agent from the very beginning’

Benjamin’s diary Benjamin seems to be aware that Napoleon is a corrupt leader; he is careful to never express his opinions in public: ‘he seldom talked, and when he did it was usually to make some cynical remark’. Imagine that you are Benjamin. Write a diary entry in which you describe your thoughts and feelings about events in chapter 7. Include: Napoleon’s punishment and execution of the hens The rumours being spread about Snowball The ban of ‘Beasts of England’ Dear diary It seems that Napoleon has decided that the best way to rule Animal farm is by using threats and violence…. It all began when…

Plenary – what is your interpretation of Napoleon as a leader? Dear diary It seems that Napoleon has decided that the best way to rule Animal farm is by using threats and violence…. It all began when… Grade C: Consistent accuracy with a range of punctuation Grade B: full range of punctuation marks used confidently and accurately Grade A: using punctuation to create a particular effect and add to the impact on the reader Using your green pen, correct any punctuation and grammar mistakes Give yourself a grade – what do you need to do to get the next grade?