Your Guide for Paper 1 (EA1) The Move to Global War (Prescribed Subject #1) 1931-1941 Rise of nationalist, militarist, totalitarian regimes Case Study #1: Expansion of Japan into East Asia and response of Western democracies Case Study #2: Rise of Italian Fascism and German Nazism and how their expansion ended “collective security” As you read “Your Guide for Paper 1,” annotate the following pts: Preparing for Paper 1 What you can expect on Paper 1 How to approach the source questions for Paper 1 Helpful Tips for Paper 1 We will complete a mock assessment for EA 1 after Spring Break – so be prepared! Understand the questions, tactics and bring EA guide!

Upcoming ia reminders…. Start editing your sections now – do not wait until the last minute! Part C is due THIS Wednesday 3/1! THIS Sunday 3/5  office hours at Starbucks (Ina & Oracle) from 3-5pm Monday 3/6: CDO Library work day NEXT Wednesday 3/8: One complete rough draft due for peer-editing NEXT Friday 3/10: Final IA due! Then, we party! 

Part A feedback Intro – clearly pose RQ, establish scope, present two sources and explain relevancy Vague statements make Ms. Bruggeman cry inside…. The author was born in 1930 which is valuable since they grew up during WWII The content is valuable because it covers a number of perspectives The purpose was to educate the reader so it is valuable in increasing knowledge Since the source is secondary, it inherently limits the legitimacy of the source Too much summary  not enough analysis    Take analysis deeper! Don’t just say “what” limited the source – explain exactly HOW and WHY that makes it limited. BAD: Since the Fireside Chat is meant to promote programs/instill confidence, it limits the source. BETTER: The purpose of this Fireside Chat was to instill confidence in the American populace which limits the source because it is used to promote the programs and is positive in nature; therefore, it does not address problems that remain unsolved. Analysis needs to be specific to YOUR investigation. Remember, you are asked to analyze OPCVL for historians studying your topic. EX on IA regarding U.S. failure to join the LofN: The content of this source is limited because it does not address Germany and the USSR’s failures to join the League. This source is valuable because it goes into detail about the effects of the League. Word count issues! You are responsible for figuring out what to cut/add….not me!

Part A Grading Letter Grade CDO Score IB Part B Score # of students A+ 20-19 5-6 A- B C+ 18-15 3-4 18 C- D 14-10 1-2 5 F 9-below

Final ia steps…. Editing Appendix Title Page Table of Contents Bibliography Page Numbers Candidate Number Formatting Submittal

Appendix NOT required This will could be included if you make reference to graphs, charts, maps, pictures, propaganda, etc. Remember, this does NOT count towards your 2,200 words

EXAMPLE APPENDIX PAGE: Photograph A: New tractors being driven from a factory in 1935 ¹ Photograph B: Propaganda poster promoting Stalin as “one of the workers”

Title Page Your title page must include your topic question, name, IB candidate number, date, and word count. Keep in mind….. Footnotes, title, bibliography, and appendix do NOT count towards the word count Choosing an appropriate title will lead to an appropriate investigation. YOU DECIDE!! Which title is probably easier to investigate and discuss effectively within the 2000 word limit??? 1. An investigation into African warfare: Why did the British army struggle in Southern Africa in the 1860’s? 2. An investigation into African colonial warfare: To what extent was the defeat of the British by the Zulu at Isandlwna in 1879 due to the mistakes made by Lord Chemlsford? Make sure your title is focused and narrow enough to ensure your discussion/analysis are not vague. Access candidate numbers on Managebac!

Title Page Requirements To what extent does Ms Title Page Requirements To what extent does Ms. Bruggeman’s awesomeness influence students’ historical understanding? Student name: George Washington Candidate Number: 003536-013 11 January 2014 Word Count: 1897

KEEP FORMATTING CONSISTENT!!!!

Useful websites www.internationalschoolhistory.net/IB/internal_assessment/examples.htm www.schoolhistory.co.uk www.ibsurvival.com › International Baccalaureate › History www.osc-ib.com

Rough draft: Wednesday march 8th Title Page Table of Contents Each section is labeled & formatting is consistent Page numbers Appendix with explanations Correct bibliography This will be the last time someone will read your entire IA…..make it count! Make it as close to the final as possible. Make all corrections this weekend!

Bibliography Book Web Primary Everything needs to be cited in the same format! Divide the citations based on source type Book Web Primary All ten sources need to be alphabetized Refer to your bibliography sheet for formatting examples By this point, you should’ve already cited everything in your annotated bibliography, so you can remove the annotations, and use just the citations! Does NOT count towards the word count

Steps for final submittal Turnitin.com Upload a copy to Managebac Print out a hard copy to turn in to Ms. Bruggeman