Writing a Feature Article on Fashion Step Ahead Book 5 Unit 1 Writing a Feature Article on Fashion this PPT is a template for our style follow all font, colour, pt sizes, etc follow all language styles as near as possible without losing meaning Ivy and Becky: apply animation in the styles set out; leave the hard slides to us 1

the factors affecting the writing of a feature article In this lesson, you will learn about: the factors affecting the writing of a feature article the organisation of a feature article the features of a feature article the writing process

What factors affect the writing of a feature article?

i.e. What is the text type? e.g. a feature article The style and structure of writing is affected by three factors: Genre i.e. What is the text type? e.g. a feature article Purpose Audience i.e. Why am I writing? e.g. to help readers appreciate fashion trends i.e. Who will read my writing? e.g. people interested in fashion

people interested in fashion What is the genre for this writing task? a feature article Who is the audience for this genre? people interested in fashion

to help readers appreciate fashion trends in Hong Kong What is the purpose of this feature article? to help readers appreciate fashion trends in Hong Kong to compare women’s fashions past and present to compares men’s fashions past and present

Exercise 1 Tick the sentence below which most likely comes from a feature article.  1. Enter our simple fashion quiz and win a whole new wardrobe.  2. In the end, Susanne picked a new green dress and said, ‘I’m going to give it to my daughter on her birthday.’  3. I look forward to reading more about fashions!  4. In the 1980s, men would wear full dress suits every day. 4. In the 1980s, men would wear full dress suits every day.

What does a feature article include?

A feature article includes: a title an introduction a body an ending

short but eye-catching Title: short but eye-catching  indicates place and time of fashion  e.g. Hong Kong fashion in the 1980s and 1990s e.g. Dressing: Power vs Comfort  use abbreviation to make the title easier to remember

catch reader’s attention with questions Introduction: catch reader’s attention with questions indicate what the article is about explain your purpose of writing e.g. Have you ever burst into laughter when looking at old photos of your parents? It is no surprise that Hong Kong fashions of the 1980s and 1990s are regarded as most memorable and distinctive. By learning about the fashion trends of men and women over the past few decades, you can discover what to do to update your wardrobe.

men’s fashion in the 1980s and 1990s Body: men’s fashion in the 1980s and 1990s women’s fashion in the 1980s and 1990s e.g. With the increasing number of women entering the workforce and taking up higher positions, dressing in business suits was very popular in both 1980s and 1990s. One of the main characteristics of the 1980s was the broad shoulder. Women used to wear over-sized blazers with big shoulder pads for a more masculine look. In contrast to the 1980s, women in the 1990s adopted minimalist styles. Both formal and casual wear for women became simpler and subtler.

summarise the main ideas and express your opinion on the issue Ending: summarise the main ideas and express your opinion on the issue e.g. Fashion trends come and go, often repeating themselves about every 20 to 30 years. Therefore, remember to save what you’ve found at the bottom of your parents’ wardrobes, and mix and match them wisely with your own fashionable items.

What are the main features of a feature article?

subheadings to help readers locate information more easily In a feature article, we use: subheadings to help readers locate information more easily topic sentences and supporting sentences to organise ideas used to/would to write about fashion history

We use subheadings to help readers locate information more easily: e.g. Casual Wear for Men in the 1980s e.g. Business Wear for Women in the 1990s

topic sentences carry the main idea of the paragraph We use topic sentences to organise ideas: topic sentences carry the main idea of the paragraph e.g. Sportswear is taking on a whole new trendy look in 2010. It’s boyish, mostly based on football uniforms and is quickly becoming fashionable and chic.

We use used to/would to write about fashion history: we use used to/would when we talk about a past habit e.g. In the 1980s, women used to/would wear jackets with shoulder pads.

Exercise 2 Rewrite the following sentences using ‘used to’. 1. Many rock singers in the 1980s permed their hair. Ans. Many rock singers in the 1980s used to perm their hair. 2. In the 1980s, legwarmers were popular fashion items. Women often wore them over tight pants. Ans. In the 1980s, legwarmers used to be popular fashion items. Women used to wear them over tight pants.

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How do I generate ideas for a feature article?

trends for women’s formal wear trends for women’s casual wear Make a list of basic information about the fashion trend: trends for women’s formal wear trends for women’s casual wear trends for men’s formal wear trends for men’s casual wear hot items of this season hot items of next season

Fashion Trends in Hong Kong Use note sheets to keep track of details: Fashion Trends in Hong Kong Time Women Men 1980s 1990s Now

Common words used in a feature article about women’s fashion: Vocabulary Common words used in a feature article about women’s fashion: 1980s 1990s Now business suits coloured hose legwarmers plastic charms shoulder pads stonewashed jeans bead bracelets cargo trousers flared trousers leather jackets pashmina short jackets biker jackets knitwear loose coats low cut waist jeans metal hardware tartan skirt 24

single-breasted jackets Vocabulary Common words used in a feature article about men’s fashion: 1980s 1990s Now acid-wash jeans designer jeans jean jackets leather jackets parachute pants polo shirts sunglasses baggy jeans cargo pants grungy jacket puffy jackets rhinestone gloves single-breasted jackets stonewashed jeans athletic pants flannel shirts skinny jeans thick rimmed glasses tight pants trucker hats tweed jackets 25

How do I write a feature article?

Pre-writing Drafting Editing Proofreading -brainstorm ideas using mind maps, tables, etc. -note down ideas, vocabulary  Drafting -use a flow chart to outline your writing plan -draft your writing  Editing -re-read and examine your draft -correct for ideas, organisation, style  Proofreading -proofread for spelling, grammar, punctuation -correct any mistakes  Finished product

Three factors affect writing: genre Summary: Three factors affect writing: genre audience purpose Organisation of a feature article: a title an introduction a body an ending

Features of a feature article: subheadings Summary: Features of a feature article: subheadings topic sentences use used to/would Generate ideas using: lists note sheets

The writing process: pre-writing drafting editing proofreading Summary: The writing process: pre-writing drafting editing proofreading

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