Student 6 Elena Post- Feedback Tasks: 30 mins Richard Galletly, Aston University

Student needs Logical division of ideas Referencing in text Referencing at end of text The need for referencing Essay structure Writing conclusions Some minor grammar mistakes

Logical Division Exercises - Oshima,2006 p65- Exercises – Fitzpatrick, 2011 p49-

In text referencing Exercises: Tissington, 2009 p71- Exercises: Bailey, 2011 p58-

Essay Structure Guide and exercises - Gillett, 2009 p8 Guide and exercises – Oshima, 2006 p56-

Introduction/ conclusion Guide: Gillett, 2009 p221- Exercises & explanation: Oshima, 2006 p72 Paragraph transitions: Oshima, 2006 p69-

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