Aim: How do we paraphrase (explain in our own words) evidence (2)? Do now: Why is paraphrasing a very important skill to learn? What are the two strategies we learned last time?

Strategy 1: Replace some key words with synonyms (write the synonyms for the underlined words or phrases). "There are some animals, such as tigers and elephants, which roam large areas in the wild, that should never be held captive (Text #3 ll. 8-9).” 1.roam _______ 2. held captive: ____________

After the replacement of some key vocabulary, use your own words to explain this example "There are some animals, such as tigers and elephants, which roam large areas in the wild, that should never be held captive (Text #3 ll. 8-9).” This evidence means there are some animals, such as tigers and elephants, which walk or run large areas in the wild, that should never be caught to put in the zoo.

Strategy 2: Change the passive voice to the active voice Grades 9–12: ECR Prompt One strategy is not enough because the sentence structure is still very similar, so…. Strategy 2: Change the passive voice to the active voice  This evidence means there are some animals, such as tigers and elephants, which walk or run large areas in the wild, that we should never catch them to put in the zoo.

Aim: How do we paraphrase (explain in our own words) evidence (2)? Remember in order to paraphrase well, we must use two strategies Strategy 1: ____________________________________ Strategy 2: ____________________________________

Aim: How do we paraphrase (explain in our own words) evidence? Assessment: Turn and Talk Tell your partner: 1. What two strategies do we use for paraphrasing? 2. Why?

Aim: How do we paraphrase (explain in our own words) evidence (2)? Group work. Paraphrase the following evidence using the two learned strategies: replace the key words Change the passive voice into the active voice.

Aim: How do we paraphrase (explain in our own words) evidence (2)? 1. “But there is one issue about which there appears to be widespread agreement, at least in principle. So long as wild animals are kept in captivity, they ought to be treated humanely (Text #1, ll 30-31).” 2. “…most animals in zoos in North America are still consigned to lead miserable lives in undersized, impoverished enclosures, both old and new, that fail to meet their biological and behavioral needs (Text #1 ll.9- 41).” S

Aim: How do we paraphrase (explain in our own words) evidence (2)? CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RI.11-12.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain.