Analyzing Article Content /Text Teknik Produksi dan Penyiaran Program Radio Kelompok Teknologi Informasi dan komunikasi Penyusun : Ahadiat,S.ST Dadang Abdurrakhman,S.Pd Drs.Liliek Julianto Taufan Adhiwiranto, S.sos Agus Nuryaman

Analyzing Article Content /Text

2. Analyzing Article Content / Text Article Type z 1.Fiksi, that is article being based on fantasy. Generally this article represent belles lettres, like short story, novel, poem, and drama

2. Non-Fiksi, that is article being based on data and also the fact. There is having the character of serious and also popular ( erudite ) The example, article, essai, feature, news or resensi

3. Faksi, that is article representing and non-fiksi fiction merger 3. Faksi, that is article representing and non-fiksi fiction merger. This article is compiled by pursuant to fact and data, is but presented to by loo like with story of like within reason short story of novel or. Prophet SAW History story and all his friend is which is re-written down can be classified by faksi

Miscellaneous which also require to be paid attention to in writing copy and radionews 1. Don'T use sentence majemuk 2. Don'T use negative words 3. Don'T use passive sentence

5. Not too much using abbreviation 4. Not too much using number of and surely complicated number. If perforced, have to be made moderate by using word “ about, gyrating, between, more or less” 5. Not too much using abbreviation 6. Not too much hence the foreign term

7. To facilitate broadcaster / newscaster, write name, number or term in foreign language according to way of reading. For example: 270 write by two hundreds seventy. Write, write etc. 8. Generally the rank / title / title needn't be used, unless related/relevant to is true sliver with news content.

9. Remember, one news one story, one sentence one idea 10. Accustoming to make lead or lead news which can draw attention listener 11. Duration News don't too long.

Some mistake of Text writing: 1. Not begin an story with words “ like expected / estimated

Example Like estimated by President of Megawati finally show Kwik Kian Gie as Lead Body of National Development Designer

2. Not begin an story “ In surprise” Surprisedly, Government Jakarta cancel helicopter buy plan from Russia Example

3. Not begin story toldly is somebody “ making news”, or “ reported on”, or “ predominating news".

Often we hear : GusDur return to make news Often we hear : GusDur return to make news. just Direct narrate to have its news. That's utilizing press report. Example

4. Not begin story toldly, “ an mentioned new growth of night in the case of Example : Try direct go to news.

5. Not make caracterisasi news as news “ good”, or “ ugly”, “ drawing”, or “ bothering"

Just Tell the news it. Let hearer determining what the news of goodness, ugly, or interest. Example

6. Not begin an story with participle phrase   6. Not begin an story with participle phrase ( boldness ) or an clause. The example see in under!!!

Your ever phone friend to narrate gossip and tell “ triedly have is concentration to look for job so that he can alter his career, Ellen desist job today?” You better tell: “ Ellen desist job today. He wish new work, become now he the concentration can to look for job".

7. Not begin story with an citation   7. Not begin story with an citation Example: Listener cannot see sign pluck. And they do not see your copy

8. Not begin story with “ there is a”, ” there are some” or “ This is

Example: All that dead phrase. Verbiage, and of no use. Sentence strength especially lay in strong verb.. Link verb is inclusive of seems, becoming, feel and see, don't have strength push sentence, make only word of is no meaning.

9. Not write first sentence with verb.: is, it, there is.

Example: That matter is not wrong, but weakness. Seldom he are acceptable, is even taken a fancy to, but in most case, is better look for action vb.. This is sentence which seldom I hear: President reside in to return in White House

10. Not begin story by the name of one who unknown or is not popular. Example: Additional order: not, start story by the name of unknown or the or entitas concept which is not chummy.

11. Not begin story with word change people.

Under this is example of story started with word change property “ He tell will never discontinue his campaign to discontinue project X-Y-Z, and today Morgan Murgatroyd bring his case to..."

12. Not write first sentence by using word “ yesterday“. Example : People listen broadcast hope to hear most recently news, final progressively good progressively

13. Not write first sentence by using verb continue.

Example : This do not inform something new hearer. Other; Dissimilar word is which I avoid: “ detail”. Each time I hear word “ detail”, “ this is detail from Sally Golightly.” Is better tell, “ In the following is story of Sally Golightly".

14. Not begin story with “ again”, “more” (many) or “ again" Example: “ Again tragedy of jet plane of passenger happened in Briton today. plane of Carteran burnted by when releasing base in Birmingham, and 54 passenger die".

15. Try in order not to begin story with negativity sentence, containing word “ do not” or “ non".

Example: Compile again the negative opener sentence become positive. Than telling, “ President will not take his journey plan to Tahiti”. Better tell, “ President cancel his transportation journey to Tahiti".

16. Not summarize too much information into one story Example : Too much fact, too much name, too much number, too much words mean too much for listener.

17. Not use construction newspaper

Example: Chief Committee of Overseas Relation of Senate tell today Moscow better desist to menace Washington. Senator of Jhon Walton tell.

Goodness : “ Chief Commission of Overseas Relation of Senate, Jhon Walton, telling today……” Or “ Chief Commission of Overseas Relation of Senate tell today…..” Chief of Jhon Walton tell.

18. Loss don't or do not reach for listener.

Example: Listener loss don't or don't fail to reach for them. Way of best in order to can arrest detain listener is talk with them, non talking to they are. Narrating of it better even much more difficult. Is such as those which told by Konfucius, “ Light Article, heard hard, Heavy article, is easy to heard".

19. Not make fact mistake.

This is mistake most fatal among altogether This is mistake most fatal among altogether. This cause you of belief loss. And in the end you the hearer loss Example