In CN: [Work Essay Revision] Rewrite the sections of your essay that need work: A more specific, elaborate, complex claim Body paragraphs with appropriate evidence Introduction to the evidence “set the scene” Piece of evidence “quote to qualify” Doesn’t have to be an actual quote! Explanation of the importance and relevance of this evidence in relation to your claim “loop for logic” This should be your longest part – your own words Concluding Paragraph rewording the main ideas and answering the question “So what?” Students will need to be able to show me a thorough, well thought out revision on Tuesday.