Using white space and linebreaks
What is… White space: how a poem is arranged on the page, including line breaks, page layout/format, and spacing Line break: where the author choose to end the line Caesura: dramatic pause, usually in the middle of a line and marked with a dash
Why do poets use white space and line breaks? to make certain words stand out to make us pause after significant words to make us stop and think because it’s the main idea
Where do we make line breaks? Line breaks serve an important purpose in poetry. The end of a line signifies a pause – short when there’s no punctuation, a little longer when a comma occurs at the end of a line, and longest of all for end punctuation such as periods or question marks. Where you locate their line breaks is where their readers will place the hanging emphasis of pause; line breaks control poems’ sound and meaning.
Examples
This Is Just To Say By William Carlos Williams, 1883 - 1963 I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox and which you were probably saving for breakfast Forgive me they were delicious so sweet and so cold
We Real Cool By Gwendolyn Brooks, 1917 – 2000 THE POOL PLAYERS. SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL. We real cool. We Left school. We Lurk late. We Strike straight. We Sing sin. We Thin gin. We Jazz June. We Die soon.
Luciérnages (Fireflies) by José Juan Tablada
Fear smells like the skin of burnt marshmallows, smells like burning hair, tastes like chalk and Robitussin and vinegar, sounds like thunder (one-one-thousand- BOOM) away, feels like numbed cold fingers, feels like pressure inside my lungs, feels like my body’s not my body, make my body disappear, fear
Fear Smells like The skin of burnt marshmallows, Smells like burning hair, Tastes like chalk and Robitussin and Vinegar, Sounds like thunder (one-one-thousand- BOOM) away, Feels like numbed cold fingers, Feels like pressure inside my lungs, Feels like my body’s not my body, Make my body disappear,
Fear Smells like the skin of burnt marshmallows, smells like burning hair, Tastes like chalk and Robitussin and vinegar, Sounds like thunder one-one-thousand-BOOM away, Feels like numbed cold fingers, Feels like pressure inside my lungs, Feels like my body’s not my body, make my body disappear, Heather Benson
The Feeling Poem Line one: Name an emotion Line two: “Smells like. . .” Line three: “Tastes like. . .” Line four: “Sounds like. . .” Line five: “Feels like. . . .” Line six: “Feels like. . .” Line seven: “Feels like. . .” Line eight: Name the emotion