Outline For Homework Plan a Paragraph Title __________________________ Topic Sentence _____________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Detail * _________________________ Explain - _____________________ Explain - _____________________ Conclusion: ________________________ __________________________________
Is my outline all filled out? Is my outline color coded? Plan a Paragraph Title __My Weekend_______ Topic Sentence: You will never guess three amazing things I did over the weekend. Detail * Cider Mill/Blakes Explain - Morgan rode a pony Explain - cider and donuts Detail * Bonfire Explain - Neighbors had a bonfire Explain - told stories Detail * Out do dinner Explain - Groupon Explain - Eggplant and great bread Conclusion: These three things were so amazing to do with my family over the weekend. Rubric for Outline Is my outline all filled out? Is my outline color coded? Did I add transition words to each detail and circle them? Are my topic and concluding sentences complete (capitals, periods, makes sense?) First, Second, Third,
Rough Draft of Paragraph- Due Wednesday My Amazing Weekend By: Mrs. Rea You will never guess the amazing weekend I had with my family. First, we went to Blake’s Cider Mill. My daughter Morgan was so excited to get to go on a Pony ride. We of course also had the best cider and donuts! Second, we had a bonfire at our neighbors house. All the kids in the neighborhood love to tell scary stories around it. It is only two doors down so it is nice to be close to home also. Third, we went out to dinner at a restaurant called Loccino Italian Grill. They have the best bread and dipping sauce. I got my favorite Eggplant there. We had a Groupon so we saved money too! These three things were so amazing to do with my family over the weekend. Rubric For Rough Draft Do I have a title? Do I have my name under the title? Did I use every part of my outline? Did I write in complete sentences? Are my sentences color coded? Do I have TWO words at least circled that I am going to replace with better words?
Final Draft- Due Friday My Fun Filled Weekend By: Mrs. Rea You will never guess what fun filled things I did this weekend! First, we got to experience Blake’s Cider Mill for the first time. My daughter Morgan was so excited to go on a pony ride. She smiled the whole time. We of course also had the best cider and donuts!! Second, we had a bonfire at my neighbors house. They live only two doors down so it is right out our backdoor. All the kids love to tell scary stories around the warm inviting fire. Third, we went out to dinner at an Italian restaurant called, Loccino Italian Grill. They have the best bread and dipping sauce. I usually get filled up from just eating that. I ordered my favorite, Eggplant. We also had a Groupon so we saved money too. These three activities were a lot of fun to do with my family over the weekend. Rubric For Final Draft Title? Name? Every sentence complete with correct punctuation? Spelling correct? Transition words? **I changed a few words to more exciting words in my paragraph. I also underlined where I added even more detail.