Yr 11 English Studies Ms Paine Australian Poetry Yr 11 English Studies Ms Paine

Modern Australian Poetry We will study a range of Australian poets You will required to analyze and comment on poems individually and in comparison. Use the Poetry Grid (supplied) to guide your thinking.

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Poetry Analysis – Using the Grid ‘Suburban Sonnet’ Poet: Gwen Harwood (1920-1995) Pg. 299 Lines to Time

‘Suburban Sonnet’ (Gwen Harwood)

She practises a fugue, though it can matter to no one if she plays well or not.

Besides her on the floor two children chatter, then scream and fight Besides her on the floor two children chatter, then scream and fight. She hushes them…

…A pot boils over. As she rushes to the stove too late a wave of nausea overpowers subject and counter-subject.

…Zest and love drain out with soapy water as she scours the crusted milk.

…Her veins ache. Once she played for Rubinstein, who yawned….

…The children caper round a sprung mouse trap where a mouse lies dead …The children caper round a sprung mouse trap where a mouse lies dead. When the soft corpse won’t move they seem afraid.

She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread.

Poetry Grid 10 Step Process for Successfully Analyzing a Poem Using “Suburban Sonnet”

“Suburban Sonnet” textual references (Gwen Harwood) “fugue”: (musical term) A composition in which a short melody/ phrase is introduced by one part and successively taken up by others…(OED) She practises a fugue, though it can matter to no one now if she plays well or not. Beside her on the floor two children chatter, then scream and fight. She hushes them. A pot boils over. As she rushes to the stove too late, a wave of nausea overpowers subject and counter-subject. Zest and love drain out with soapy water as she scours the crusted milk. Her veins ache. Once she played for Rubinstein, who yawned. The children caper round a sprung mousetrap where a mouse lies dead. When the soft corpse won't move they seem afraid. She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread. “Rubinstein”: famous concert pianist in 1950s & 60s

Step 1: Subject Matter Question: What event, situation, or experience does the poem describe or record? “Beside her on the floor two children chatter, then scream and fight. She hushes them. A pot boils over…” Answer: A suburban mother living an ordinary life eg. Children fighting, pots over boiling etc

Step 2: Purpose/ Key Ideas/ Message Title: “Suburban Sonnet” A sonnet is a famous traditional poetic form associated with Shakespeare What does the juxtaposition with the word “Suburban” indicate? Questions What is the poet’s purpose in writing this? What message does Harwood want to communicate? Answer Communicates despair & disappointment in being a suburban ‘desperate’ housewife rather than living an extraordinary life as a concert pianist. “She practises a fugue, though it can matter to no one now if she plays well or not.” Musical reference to the career she could have had.

Step 3: Emotion/ Mood/ Feeling/ Tone Questions What is the predominant emotion, tone, or mood of the poem? Does the mood change during the poem? What emotions or feelings does the poet seek to evoke in the reader/ hearer? …Zest and love drain out with soapy water as she scours/ the crusted milk. Answer: Despair & disappointment For the housewife whose life has not turned out like she had hoped for

Step 4: Techniques Including (some might be more evident depending on the poem being studied): Step 5: Structure Step 6: Sensory Appeal Step 7: Language Step 8: Imagery Step 9: Movement & Rhythm Step 10: Sounds

Step 5: Structure How is the poem structured? Does it have conventional structure such as a sonnet or ode? Does it have stanzas with regular number of lines, or any other features of structural design?

Step 6: Sensory Appeal Answer No Questions Is the poem designed to appeal to one or more of the five senses – touch, taste, smell, hearing, sight – through description? How does this impact upon the reader? Answer No

The structure of “Suburban Sonnet” A Sonnet usually has a consistent rhyme scheme with 14 lines and a turn on thought (volta) at the 8th or 9th line. are of a similar length. The letters indicate the rhyme/ half-rhyme scheme; but is irregular 1 She practises a fugue, though it can matter (a) 2 to no one now if she plays well or not. (b) 3 Beside her on the floor two children chatter, (a) 4 then scream and fight. She hushes them. A pot (b) 5 boils over. As she rushes to the stove (c) 6 too late, a wave of nausea overpowers (d) 7 subject and counter-subject. Zest and love (c) 8 drain out with soapy water as she scours (d) 9 the crusted milk. Her veins ache. Once she played (e) 10 for Rubinstein, who yawned. The children caper (f) 11 round a sprung mousetrap where a mouse lies dead. (e) 12 When the soft corpse won't move they seem afraid. (e) 13 She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper (f) 14 featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread. (e) VOLTA as the woman reminisces about what her life could have been.

Step 7: Language Answers: Questions How would you describe the poet’s use of words –vivid, striking, arresting, effective or colourless and predictable? Is the language appropriate to the subject and/ or theme? What effect does the language have on the reader? Striking imagery of the dead mouse. (Unexpected) …The children caper round a sprung mousetrap where a mouse lies dead. When the soft corpse won't move they seem afraid. She comforts them; and wraps it in a paper featuring: Tasty dishes from stale bread.   Irony (Tasty/ Corpse)

Step 8: Imagery Questions Are there any striking examples of similes, metaphors, personifications or symbols in the poem? What is their effect? Metaphor: pot boiling over like vomiting & musical reference back to fugue ….A pot boils over. As she rushes to the stove too late, a wave of nausea overpowers subject and counter-subject. Zest and love drain out with soapy water as she scours the crusted milk… Metaphor: positive emotions draining away in the kitchen

Step 9 : Movement & Rhythm Questions (Movement) Does the poem have a regular (slow or fast) rhythm? What is the effect of any rhythmic/ kinetic qualities on the poem’s meaning or tone? What kind of energy does the poem have? Answer (Movement): Rhythm = slow Tone = depressing Energy = lacklustre “Beside her on the floor two children chatter, then scream and fight. She hushes them.” These words are phrased to be read slowly and reflect the energy and tone of the poem.

Step 10: Sounds Answer: No (possibly) Questions: Does the poem have any significant sound features? Is it musical? Does the poet use onomatopoeia, alliteration, or assonance? Does the poem rhyme? What are the effects of these features of sound on the effect of the poem? Perhaps the lack of language adornment is deliberate? Does this fit with mood and message of the poem?

Critical Response & Summary “Suburban Sonnet” (p. 299) What is the irony in the title “Suburban Sonnet”? What kind of activities and routines are described in this poem? What is the poet’s attitude to them? How does the reader know this? What is the message of this poem? How does Harwood communicate it?