– Using today’s chapter guide, make sure your Red Kayak notes and quotes are complete through chapter 10. 1 NOV 2017 TODAY WE WILL REVIEW HOW TO CORRECTLY TRANSCRIBE & CITE DIRECT QUOTES. Visit the library. Finish chapter 11.

WRITING CLASSWORK GRADE 25 PTS 5 points per quote Reviewing your QUIZ OVER CHAPTER 1-6 WRITING CLASSWORK GRADE 25 PTS 5 points per quote 2 pts for transcribing it EXACTLY 1 pt for correct use of quotation marks 1 pt for correct parenthetical citation 1 pt for correct placement of ending period READING ASSESSMENT GRADE 22 POINTS 1 PT FOR A CORRECT HEADING 6 PTS FOR PART I 15 PTS FOR PART II: 1 pt. = CORRECT CHAPTER 1 pt = CORRECT PAGE 1 PT = A DIRECT QUOTE THAT PROVES THE EVENT (even if the grader doesn’t know the book). 2 GRADES ONE FOR READING ONE FOR WRITING

Brady thinks about his sister Amanda. Pg. 23 Brady thinks about his sister Amanda. He was far enough ahead that I couldn’t read the words Miss Amanda painted on his stern. I don’t know what made me think of it then—maybe the panic—but I recalled the morning my sister died. The Miss Amanda is named for my sister. Most workboats get named for mothers or grandmothers, but my sister was the first girl born to the Parks family in two generations. And while it’s true she was only an infant when she died, she was old enough to smile, and we were all nuts about her. “I don’t know what made me think of it then—maybe the panic—but I recalled the morning my sister died” (Cummings 23).

LIBRARY ALL ABOUT THE BOOK BLOCK A = 23 POINTS BLOCK B = 18.4 POINTS NINJA POINTS FOR QUARTER 1 LIBRARY ALL ABOUT THE BOOK AVERAGE POINTS EARNED IN AUGUST & SEPTEMBER + AVERAGE POINTS EARNED IN OCTOBER = QTR 1 POINTS BLOCK A = 23 POINTS BLOCK B = 18.4 POINTS BLOCK C = 23.75 POINTS STARTING WITH NEXT WEEK’S READING LOG, GRAPHIC NOVELS CANNOT BE COUNTED FOR INDEPENDENT READING MINUTES/PAGES. TODAY’S POINTS WILL BE USED FOR QUARTER 2.

Pg 40. “I just wanted to tell you what a super job you did, Brady. Everyone’s talking about it. Down here at the station, we’re real proud of you. I told your dad, I said, ‘Let the kid take tomorrow off, he deserves it’ ”. “I just wanted to tell you what a super job you did, Brady. Everyone’s talking about it. Down here at the station, we’re real proud of you. I told your dad, I said, ‘Let the kid take tomorrow off, he deserves it’ ” (Cummings 40).

Pg. 17 I couldn’t hear it, but I saw a fire truck race by the store, a yellow blip, and disappear. “I couldn’t hear it, but I saw a fire truck race by the store, a yellow blip, and disappear” (Cummings 17).

Pg. 22 As I did, I heard a hard thump in the bow and the boat bounced forward. I swung my head back to see Tilly land awkwardly in the tiny space at the front of my skiff. “As I did, I heard a hard thump in the bow and the boat bounced forward. I swung my head back to see Tilly land awkwardly in the tiny space at the front of my skiff” (Cummings 22). “Tilly land awkwardly in the tiny space at the front of my skiff” (Cummings 22).

Pg. 10 So there we were, all of us laughing because we’d knocked out four oxymorons smack in a row—and that’s when we first saw the red kayak. From where we stood, you could see down the grassy slope behind our house, on past Dad’s shop and the dock, to the creek. And out there, heading our way, was Mr. DiAngelo’s new red kayak. “And out there, heading our way, was Mr. DiAngelo’s new red kayak” (Cummings 10). “So there we were, all of us laughing because we’d knocked out four oxymorons smack in a row—and that’s when we first saw the red kayak” (Cummings 10). “and that’s when we first saw the red kayak” (Cummings 10).

Plus I got a real kick out of Ben. He’s a cute kid Plus I got a real kick out of Ben. He’s a cute kid. “A towhead,” Mom called him because his hair is so blond it’s almost white. He had one of those haircuts that looked like somebody put a bowl on his head and cut around it. His eyes were light two big blueberries. And when he smiled, two deep dimples appeared in the center of his cheeks. “Plus I got a real kick out of Ben. He’s a cute kid. ‘A towhead,’ Mom called him because his hair is so blond it’s almost white” (17). From page 41

REMEMBER… 1. You are REQUIRED to take the notes and quotes posted Please finish reading chapter 11 and complete your notes and quotes. REMEMBER… 1. You are REQUIRED to take the notes and quotes posted on the board (and in your chapter guide). 2. You are ENCOURAGED to take notes or quotes that may not be specifically requested, but seem important or useful. To SUMMARIZE: the big ideas in your own words, CITE IT. To PARAPHRASE: include the details with the big ideas; in your own words; CITE IT. To QUOTE: transcribe exactly as written; quotation marks; CITE IT.

Chapter 11 QUOTES NOTES CHARACTERS SUMMARIZE: big ideas PARAPHRASE: include the details QUOTE: transcribe EXACTLY inside quotation marks Chapter 11 NOTES Paraphrase what Brady did on the day of Amanda’s funeral and how he feels about it (71-72). Summarize why Brady’s mom feels she understands why Mrs. and Mr. DiAngelo (Gina & Marcellus) are not together ( ). Paraphrase Brady’s actions after he learns Mrs. DiAngelo is by herself at the house ( ). Summarize Tom’s accusations about his cordless drill (78). Paraphrase why Tom is stressed about the petition (78 ). Summarize the last 2 pages of chapter 11(79-80). QUOTES CHARACTERS CARL: Complete the 2 sentence quote in which Brady describes his Aunt Tracy and Carl that begins, “My aunt Tracy had…” (73). BRADY: Complete the 3 sentence quote describing Brady’s relationship with the water that begins, “But I knew I….” (79). THEME: Quote the possible thematic statement by Brady’s Mom (70). SETTING: Quote the description of Bailey’s Wharf (71).