Plath - The Arrival of the Bee Box Date: Objectives: Introduce and annotate the poem Explore the theme of control.
What words or ideas pop into your head when you think of bees. Warm-up - Bees When a poet uses a metaphor, it depends on pre-existing notions about a thing. What words or ideas pop into your head when you think of bees. Write down 2-3 – we’ll share – write down others ideas too.
Context before reading poem (write this one down) In the poem, Plath expresses a desire to be in control. This is her in a moment of panic before calmly making a decision.
Let’s read The Arrival of the Bee box I ordered this, clean wood box Square as a chair and almost too heavy to lift. I would say it was the coffin of a midget Or a square baby Were there not such a din in it. The box is locked, it is dangerous. I have to live with it overnight And I can't keep away from it. There are no windows, so I can't see what is in there. There is only a little grid, no exit. I put my eye to the grid. It is dark, dark, With the swarmy feeling of African hands Minute and shrunk for export, Black on black, angrily clambering. How can I let them out? It is the noise that appals me most of all, The unintelligible syllables. It is like a Roman mob, Small, taken one by one, but my god, together! I lay my ear to furious Latin. I am not a Caesar. I have simply ordered a box of maniacs. They can be sent back. They can die, I need feed them nothing, I am the owner. I wonder how hungry they are. I wonder if they would forget me If I just undid the locks and stood back and turned into a tree. There is the laburnum, its blond colonnades, And the petticoats of the cherry. They might ignore me immediately In my moon suit and funeral veil. I am no source of honey So why should they turn on me? Tomorrow I will be sweet God, I will set them free. The box is only temporary.
Note this down: Stanza 1 “I” first word – personal, control ‘Square as a chair’ – simile, domestic, comfortable ‘Coffin’ – associated with death. Dark and unsettling. “Din” – noise, hard to ignore / suppress The language of the poem is unable to label or control the bees correctly.
Note this down: Stanza 2 “locked”, “dangerous” – frightens and attracts her. “have to live with it” – metal issues ‘No exit’ (for them) – asserting control
Note this down: Stanza 3 Moves closer to the box. “minute and shrunk” - Swarming sounds adds to claustrophobic or trapped atmosphere. Horrific metaphor - “African hands” – slave trade where the strong control the weak – poem about control.
Note this down: Stanza 4 Outside the box, the speaker remains nervous. Simile – “like a roman mob” - danger The thought of all the bees acting with a single purpose unnerves her. Bees can represent mental issues/problems here.
Note this down: Stanza 5 Latin and Caesar – cannot understand or control. Hope – image of maniacs less scary than slaves or mobs. Reveals darker side to her persona – cruel selfishness. Means of control - food
Note this down: Stanza 6 Giving up humanity – becoming object – suicide metaphor. Bees hungry – not angry (can ignore – but if interested) laburnum – a tree Colonnades – building structure
Note this down: Stanza 7 Moon – Bee suit She is in control. Not a victim. Let the bees / mental issues out and release control of them. The box (keeping our issues inside) only a temporary measure.
Note this down: Final note Pronoun “I” used 18 times Ownership of the bees causes her to become hyper-aware of her own sense of self. The poem is about control and control of her identity.
Questions on back of page Complete questions for homework. Cooldown - finish the following sentences. I think...... I know........ I want to know........
May need a second class to finish this Homework questions could be used to fill that class. Use warm-up on next slide too
Warm-up – think-pair-share: Fear. Think for 1 min, write with a partner, share with the class Do you think people should face their fears? Why or why not? Have you any experience with this.