Journals Do’s and Don’ts.

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Journals Do’s and Don’ts

Journal Components Failure to fully complete your journal components will result in a ZERO:

Do each step: 1. Fully engage the prompt: Write out the ENTIRE prompt. Fully engage the prompt. Minimum 20 sentences for narrative/personal reflection. If the prompt is a quote, explain what the quote means, use specific examples to support your position, and elaborate on your examples to tie to the topic. Minimum 10 sentences.

Punctuation and Capitalization 2. Use punctuation – Use a period or quesiton at the end of a sentence. Using an ellipsis, “…”, means that you are continuing an idea somewhere else. It is not the same as using a period. 3. Capitalize proper noun (Mike, Mrs. Franczak, Halo 3); the word at the beginning of a sentence; and the word “I”.

Misusing and Misspelling 4. Avoid these commonly misused or misspelled words: i’m  I’m; there, their & they’re; where, were, we’re & wear; your & you’re; rite, right, write & wright (this is not a word it is someone’s name); cause & because; which & witch; to, too & two; know, no & now; our & are; hole & whole; loose & lose; a lotshould be a lot).

Inappropriate Abbreviations and Responses 5. Avoid TEXTSPEAK: wanna, gonna, sorta, kinda, cuz, LOL, OMG, C, U, R, and anything similar to any of these. 6. Avoid writing inappropriate responses: If you would not talk to Mrs. Zorn or your parents about it, it is probably distasteful or inappropriate for school.

Proof Reading Your Responses Journal Structure NARRATIVES/PERSONAL REFLECTIONS should be a minimum of 20 complete sentences. Quote responses should be a minimum of 10 complete sentences. Each sentence should relate to the topic by explaining the quote, describing a relevant supporting example, or tying your example back to the topic.

Complete Sentences A complete sentence expresses a complete thought. It is very important that you proof read your responses to make sure that your sentences are complete and make sense. Every sentence of your response should make sense and relate to the topic. Journal responses often do not make any sense because of a lack of sentence structure or because they do not have anything to do with the topic.

Incomplete Sentences Read your sentences aloud to make sure that they make sense on their own and relate to the topic. Insufficient Examples: Only you can not your friends. A goal in life or a sporting event. If I want to play football later. But if you do every assignment it’s hard.

Well I sorta think this might be right… Be DIRECT when writing a journal response! Don’t write “I think this means” or “I don’t know what this means.” Don’t refer to yourself in your response unless the topic asks something specific about you or unless you are describing a story with you in it. The only time you should write “I think” is if the topic asks what you think or if you are describing something you think in a PERSONAL REFLECTION.

We Don’t Believe in Filler Baby! Don’t write filler sentences like: “That is what the quote means.” Don’t repeat the journal quote as your explanation for what it means. Insufficient Example: “The man who can't dance thinks the band is no good.” Explain, Support, Elaborate. The man who can’t dance thinks the band is no good. The man probably just doesn’t like music and dancing. That’s what the quote means.

Addressing the Topic Make sure that you are following the directions, don’t just write about how you feel or what you think. Insufficient Example: “You can't stop the waves, but you can learn to surf.” Explain, Support, Elaborate. Some times it’s hard to surf if you are not good at swimming. Surfing can be really fun. It’s hard to surf if you can’t stop the waves.

More Insufficient Responses: Insufficient Example: “People are just about as happy as they make up their minds to be.” Explain, Support, Elaborate. Happiness is very important to life. I like it when I am happy I don’t like being bummed out or sad. My mom always tells me to be happy when I am sad, but sometimes I can’t help it. It’s hard being happy when something bad has happened to you.

“I did some stuff and it was fun!” Use Detailed Supporting Examples Detailed supporting examples are examples that paint a picture and show the reader exactly what idea you are trying to get across. The following sentences do not convey the author’s point or illustrate a detailed situation. Bad Examples: For example, people will always try to make you something that you are not. You just have to be yourself. When life makes things difficult you have to deal with it. It is easier to give up, but hard work gets you farther. Just be yourself and do not be something you’re not, because it can hurt you.

Sufficent Example Quote: “Different things make different people happy.” Explain, support, elaborate. Sufficient Example: In life, “different things make different people happy.” For example, my friend Brian is 6’3 and likes to play football, but I am only 5’7 and playing football isn’t fun for me, because I get hurt too much. Just because football makes Brian happy doesn’t mean that it has to make me happy too.