Learning Targets, 9/30 I can revise my own writing by implementing the changes that my peer suggested, or by implementing the changes that I found on my own. I can work quietly so as to not distract other students from their work.

Homework Read “Stockings,” “Church,” “The Man I Killed,” and “Ambush” and notes (1. In “The Man I Killed,” how does the narrator empathize with the dead VC soldier? What kind of man does the narrator imagine the dead man was? Be specific. Who does the dead man remind you of? 2. How is the story different in “Ambush”? Why do you think O’Brien retells the story differently? 3. What is the significance of the last line of “Ambush”? What happens here?) Due Monday, 10/3. College essay is due (submitted either through Google Docs OR email) by Tuesday, 10/4 at 8am. I will be looking at ALL DRAFTS (including revisions made by peers and/or myself).