Hawk Roosting Useful facts about hawks: Top of their food chain roosting = birds settling down to rest or sleep in their nest Useful facts about hawks: Top of their food chain Eat other birds and small mammals (carnivorous) Evolved to kill efficiently Excellent eyesight for hunting
What type of word keeps cropping up? sophistry = deception/trickery allotment = a person's garden I sit in the top of the wood, my eyes closed. Inaction, no falsifying dream Between my hooked head and hooked feet: Or in sleep rehearse perfect kills and eat. The convenience of the high trees! The air's buoyancy and the sun's ray Are of advantage to me; And the earth's face upward for my inspection. My feet are locked upon the rough bark. It took the whole of Creation To produce my foot, my each feather: Now I hold Creation in my foot Or fly up, and revolve it all slowly - I kill where I please because it is all mine. There is no sophistry in my body: My manners are tearing off heads - The allotment of death. For the one path of my flight is direct Through the bones of the living. No arguments assert my right: The sun is behind me. Nothing has changed since I began. My eye has permitted no change. I am going to keep things like this. What type of word keeps cropping up? Why might that be? What does it say about that character, considering this is in the first person?
What other patterns can you see? I sit in the top of the wood, my eyes closed. Inaction, no falsifying dream Between my hooked head and hooked feet: Or in sleep rehearse perfect kills and eat. The convenience of the high trees! The air's buoyancy and the sun's ray Are of advantage to me; And the earth's face upward for my inspection. My feet are locked upon the rough bark. It took the whole of Creation To produce my foot, my each feather: Now I hold Creation in my foot Or fly up, and revolve it all slowly - I kill where I please because it is all mine. There is no sophistry in my body: My manners are tearing off heads - The allotment of death. For the one path of my flight is direct Through the bones of the living. No arguments assert my right: The sun is behind me. Nothing has changed since I began. My eye has permitted no change. I am going to keep things like this. What other patterns can you see? How might they link to his arrogance/ego?
Complete this starter (with 3/4 sentences) The hawk seems to see himself as ... Ideas you might have explored: a God all powerful controlling perfect able to do whatever he wants above everyone else
TYRANNY POWER CONTROL ARROGANCE 'The allotment of death' Now, I want you to explain how connect 4 ideas together in a diagram. You need to explain how they link together in the context of this poem. Ask 'who', 'what' and 'why' to help - use your questioning sheets. More difficult/challenge: show how the quotation in the middle can relate to the 4 ideas. TYRANNY POWER 'The allotment of death' CONTROL ARROGANCE
The writer is showing how death... When he says '....' The hawk could represent... The bird's actions link to humans because... State an idea Use quotes Ask how/why (often more than once) Link to feelings and/or message The work on the last slide about themes/ideas and symbols should help you to do a more developed answer in these areas. pleasure, control, decides, dictates, dictator, desire, need, hunger, ability, God-like, tyrant, self-centred, arrogant, self-important, obsessive self-serving, commanding, controlling, decides
Progress check: Compare your first 3/4 sentence answer with your second developed paragraph. You have improved your analytical skills if you've widened your discussion, focused on specific things, but also looked at 'wider issues' and symbolism.
"I hold Creation in my foot" Detailed analysis: bird kills animals here "The allotment of death" garden end of life where you grow things contrast living plants The metaphor "allotment of death" tells us how the bird kills his prey in a place you normally expect...... This shows..... "I hold Creation in my foot" Clues: life, death, God. ? ? ? The image of the hawk "holding Creation in his foot" presents us with ...
Some questions: 1) If the bird has "rehearsed" the killings in his dreams, what does that tell you? 2) Why is he so arrogant/egotistical? 3) Why does he describe the describe his body parts in detail? Why does he focus on the ones he does? 4) If he was a person, what sort of person would he be? Could he represent anyone in particular? 5) Highlight all the words related to power and control - what do they tell you about how he feels about himself in the world?