Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 2, 2017 Twelfth Night Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 2, 2017 Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, and something to write with. You do not need ipads or phones.

Objectives Students will be able to review the writing prompts and brainstorm at least 3 ideas Students will be able to construct an arguable, bold, thesis statement Students will be able to compare/contrast the film version of Twelfth Night with the play

Viola and Olivia fail to communicate clearly with one another and it affects their relationship. What is wrong with this thesis statement? How could it be improved? Thesis statements

Twelfth Night film Expectations for movie viewing: Head up No phones, iPads No talking Be thoughtful—how can I use this film to help me with my essay? What are some things I am noticing? How is the film like the play? How is it different? Twelfth Night film

Homework: Thesis statement and prompt selection are due tomorrow to turnitin.com at 11:59pm

Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 3, 2017 Twelfth Night Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 3, 2017 Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, and something to write with. You do not need ipads or phones.

Students will be able to critique three thesis statements by identifying strengths and weaknesses of each Students will be able to recall details from the play and compare/contrast play and film adaptation. Objectives

Thesis Statement Feedback Throughout the Twelfth Night by William Shakespeare the characters seem insane due to their constant delusion, obsession, and fear for themselves and the ones they love. Thesis Statement Feedback

Thesis Statement Feedback Feste the fools position to entertain and humor Olivia makes him more of a central character in the play than a secondary one. Thesis Statement Feedback

Thesis Statement Feedback Antonio’s selfless actions reflect Shakespeare’s statement on how humans will do anything for love. Thesis Statement Feedback

Twelfth Night film Expectations for movie viewing: Head up No phones, iPads No talking Be thoughtful—how can I use this film to help me with my essay? What are some things I am noticing? How is the film like the play? How is it different? Twelfth Night film

Homework: Thesis statement and prompt selection are due tonight to turnitin.com at 11:59pm

Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 7, 2017 Twelfth Night Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 7, 2017 Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, YOUR IPAD, and something to write with.

Students will be able to view feedback concerning thesis statements Students will be able to revise thesis statements with feedback Students will be able to view Twelfth Night and compare/contrast the film and play Objectives

Section 03—7 students without thesis statements turned in; 6 without theme tracker assignment turned in Section 04—5 students without thesis statements turned in; 4 without theme tracker assignment Section 05—9 students without thesis statements turned in; 9 without theme tracker ???????????

Log in to turnitin.com Have you submitted your thesis statement? Does it have feedback—either voice or written? What changes do you think you should make? Take 10 minutes to work silently on revising your thesis statement and creating an intro paragraph Log in to turnitin.com

Homework Due tonight at 11:59 pm: Introductory Paragraph with REVISED thesis statement Homework

Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 8, 2017 Twelfth Night Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 8, 2017 Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, YOUR IPAD, and something to write with.

Have you submitted your revised thesis statement? Intro paragraph? Does it have feedback? What changes do you think you should make? Take 10 minutes to work silently on revising your revised thesis statement and intro paragraph Log in to turnitin.com

Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 9, 2017 Twelfth Night Ms. Batchelor—English 3 February 9, 2017 Please take out your writing assignment directions, your notes, YOUR IPAD, and something to write with.

Objectives Spend 15 minutes creating body paragraphs/locating quotes Students will be able to properly cite text evidence in parenthetical citations and Works Cited Students will be able to compare/contrast movie and play Objectives

Works Cited

In-text citations Play In-text (parenthetical) Citations: If we are writing about one play then we would replace the play title in the parenthetical citation for the author's last name.  Author: Shakespeare Italicize play titles: Twelfth Night  Use Arabic numerals to refer to act, scene, and line numbers (no page numbers are listed): 3.2.10 or 3.2.10-25 if we are covering information from lines 10 through 25. If the line number are 100 or higher, we use the first whole line number 265 and the last two digits of the second line number: 5.2.265-75. If referring to an act and scene of a play in your the body of your text, format it as such: In 2.2, Hamlet's despondency becomes the subject of mockery amongst his peers. If we are only referring to one work by Shakespeare in our paper than our parenthetical citation would look like this: (Shakespeare 3.2.115) If we have not  yet introduced the play in the body of our paper, the first parenthetical citation will look like this: (Twelfth Night 3.2.115) In-text citations

Homework Complete rough draft and submit to turnitin.com by 11:59 pm Bring a printed copy to class Tomorrow we are completing peer reviews Homework