Ruffles Revision 1: Paper 1 Question 5

English Language GCSE Paper 1 Question 5 Tuesday June 6th 2017 40 marks 24 marks for content/organisation 16 marks for technical accuracy Show don’t tell Dinner party adjectives Punctuation toolkit Change your sentence starters and structures Descriptive language techniques Grammar + Accuracy Time management

Show, don’t tell

Tell into show The forest was dark. The forest was scary. The moon shone through the trees. It was cold. Turn these ‘tells’ into ‘shows’.

5. You are going to enter a creative writing competition. Your entry will be judged by a panel of people of your own age. Either: Write a description suggested by this picture. Or: Write a short story about a teacher.

Sentence Structures Write your own paragraph describing one of the pictures in this PowerPoint 2 short sentences. 2 medium sentences. 2 long sentences.