PCC #2 Rough draft feedback My Favorite mistakes 

Lack of good research Boo!  YAY!  “gender roles in American society” Imdb Netflix Wikipedia Weebly Wiki/wikia pages for tv series/icons/movies/etc. “gender roles in American society” “gender norms in American society” “Gender roles/norms in American tv series” “gender roles in the walking dead”

Lack of a thesis Does your pop culture topic reinforce (support) or challenge (reject) traditional American norms (which one specifically…class? Gender? Race? Ethnicity? Disability? Religion?) Example: Although Emma Stone's portrayal of Gwen Stacy in The Amazing Spider-Man 2 overcomes the limits of the damsel stereotype and represents a convincingly authentic, autonomous, empowered woman, the motivations behind the original storyline lead to the confinement of Peter Parker's role as "the man", thus preventing a true challenge of either the male or the female gender roles.

Lack of citations (in-text) You’ve got to do two things… Introduce your quote According to the author (or put author’s name)… On page __, the author stated… The author wrote… As the author mentioned on page__... In the __ paragraph, the author wrote… One example of this in the text is… Cite your quote using mla (OWL Purdue cite on my webpage)

Lack of analysis 4 words… Use The Resource wall

Lack of time management The day after your final PCC is due! Research (on your own) Develop argument (on your own) Complete outline and turn in (on your own) Draft based on outline/brainstorm and turn in as completely as possible (in class…finish on your own) Revise and edit and turn in final draft (in class…finish on your own Throughout the process Come in to Mr. G or Ms. Rael for help Direct message mr. g or ms. Rael for help Create small due dates for yourself in order to complete the 5 steps within your available time Use the resource wall for time management/planning strategies if needed.

Edits and revisions Accuracy Analysis Technical Structure Style Those of you with feedback Read through it carefully! Use the resource wall for to fix highlighted areas Accuracy Analysis Technical Structure Style If you still have questions, let me know. Turn in a final draft by Friday 2/23 at midnight for credit Those of you without feedback, turn in a final draft by Friday 2/23 at midnight for credit