EDUQAS PAPER 2 - READING

21st Century What should you write? FULL SENTENCES What do you need to remember? SPECIFIC DETAILS What do you need to avoid? TERMINOLOGY SINGLE WORDS (instead of sentences) 21st Century

How many points/quotes should you make? 6-8 Question 2 - 10 marks How many points/quotes should you make? 6-8 What are the marks given for? CLEAR POINTS QUOTES TO SUPPORT POINTS TERMINOLOGY What do you need to avoid? WAFFLING!

TRACKING THROUGH THE TEXT - 2 phrases from the start - 2 phrases from the middle - 2 phrases from the end

In the text, the writer [insert link to question] by using the phrase ‘___________________’, where the [insert word class/language device/structural device] creates the image of________________. This would make the reader feel _____________ because _____________.

In the text, the writer makes the trip seem hard by using the phrase ‘giant’, where the adjective creates the image of an intimidating and enormous crack. This would make the reader feel worried for Fogle as he is tiny in comparison to the crevasse.

In the text, the writer [insert link to question] by using the phrase ‘ACROSS 481 MILES OF ICE IN 18 DAYS’, where the statistic creates the image of ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE FEAT.

How does Frank Gardner show how wonderful his day when he visited the gorillas? “I was only ten feet away from them” “They treated me like a pampered emperor” “We watched spellbound” “I got to see this endangered species with fewer than 800 left in the wild.” In the text, the writer [insert link to question] by using the phrase ‘___________________’, where the [insert word class/language device/structural device] creates the image of________________. This would make the reader feel _____________ because _____________.

He shows how wonderful his day was when he says he felt like a “pampered emperor”. The adjective ‘pampered’ shows he enjoyed the experience of being carried around and being made to feel special. Another part that showed he had a wonderful day was when he says he was “10 feet away”. This statistic shows how close he was and suggests he could almost touch the gorilla. The writer shows how wonderful it was with the quote ‘we watched spellbound.’ This suggests it was a magical experience for everyone watching. The pronoun ‘we’ exaggerates this as it means every single person there thought it was this way. Another part that showed he had a wonderful day was when he says “I got to see this endangered species with fewer than 800 left in the wild.” This statistic shows how lucky he feels to have seen an animal that is nearly extinct .

19th Century What should you write? FULL SENTENCES What do you need to remember? SPECIFIC DETAILS What do you need to avoid? TERMINOLOGY SINGLE WORDS (instead of sentences) 19th Century

How many points/quotes should you make? 6-8 Question 4 - 10 marks How many points/quotes should you make? 6-8 What are the marks given for? CLEAR POINTS RELATED TO QUOTE QUOTES TO SUPPORT POINTS TERMINOLOGY GIVING YOUR OPINION What do you need to avoid? WAFFLING!

TRACKING THROUGH THE TEXT - 2 phrases from the start - 2 phrases from the middle - 2 phrases from the end

In the text I think/feel that [insert link to question] because the writer says ‘___________________’, where the [insert word class/language device/structural device] makes me think that _____________________ because ____________________.

What do you think and feel about Joe’s views about getting out of the crevasse? In the text I think Joe feels mentally exhausted because the writer says ‘felt paralysed, incapable of thinking’, where the adjective ‘paralysed’ makes me think Joe physically and mentally frozen on the spot by the idea of not knowing what was beneath him.

What do you think and feel about Joe’s views about getting out of the crevasse? ‘I stared blankly at the snow below my feet not fully believing what I was seeing. A floor!’ ‘A pillar of gold light beamed diagonally from a small hole in the roof’ ‘I knew it then with absolute certainty. How I would do it, and when I would reach it were not considered. I just knew.’ In the text I think/feel that [insert link to question] because the writer says ‘___________________’, where the [insert word class/language device/structural device] makes me think that _____________________ because ____________________.

Question 5 How many marks? 4 MARKS How many points should you make? 2 How are each of the points evidenced? QUOTE & EXPLANATION FROM EACH EXTRACT FOR EACH POINT What do you need to avoid? TERMINOLOGY LONG ANSWERS

How many points/quotes should you make? Question 6 How many marks? 10 MARKS How many points/quotes should you make? 5 COMPARISONS BETWEEN THE TWO TEXTS What are the marks given for? QUOTES FROM EACH EXTRACT TO SUPPORT POINTS OF COMPARISON ANALYSIS OF THE EFFECT ON THE READER TERMINOLOGY What do you need to avoid? WAFFLING!

BOTH WRITERS SUGGEST THE WEATHER WAS A MASSIVE HARDSHIP ON THE TRIP. FOGLE SAYS THE TEMPERATURE WAS SOMETIMES ‘-50°c’ AND WERE ‘BITTERLY COLD’ WHICH SUGGESTS THE WEATHER WAS EXTREMELY HARSH. SIMILARLY, SCOTT SAYS THE STORM MOVED ‘VIOLENTLY.’ BOTH WRITERS USE ADVERBS TO SHOW THE PAIN AND PUNISHMENT THEY RECEIVED FROM THE WEATHER.

BOTH EXPEDITIONS TO THE SOUTH POLE SUFFERED MAJOR PROBLEMS. THE MAIN HARDSHIP FOR FOGLE WAS HE ‘THOUGHT HE WAS GOING TO DIE’ WHICH TELLS THE READER THE EXPEDITION WAS NEARLY FATAL. IN COMPARISON, SCOTT’S TRIP SEEMS TO BE JUST AS DANGEROUS AS ‘ALL OF US’ ARE CERTAIN IT IS ‘IMPOSSIBLE’ TO MOVE. ‘ALL’ SUGGESTS THAT SCOTT IS NOT BEING PARANOID AND THE WHOLE GROUP (AND THE READER) KNOW THEY ARE IN A BLEAK SITUATION.