Hero’s Journey Essays Time to Revise

20 points = Quotes (5 points each, 2 from movie, 2 from article) There? Lead in? Correct parenthetical citation? Matching entry in Works cited? Correct Punctuation? 20 points = Evidence All 12 stages (1 point per stage). Be sure to name the stage and match it to an event(s) in the movie Explanation of theory (8 points)

10 points = thesis statement 10 points = topic sentences 20 points = Cohesion Between topic sentences & content of paragraph Each paragraph relates back to thesis Smooth transition between ideas Includes introduction & conclusion *If you don’t have topic sentences, you can’t earn these 20 points. *Be sure to transition between ideas and from one paragraph to the next.

10 points = phrases 10 points = grammar 1st/6th: 3 appositive, 3 prepositional 3rd/5th: 2 appositive, 2 prepositional, 2 participial 10 points = grammar I have not deducted any points for grammar yet. We will revisit this once revisions have been submitted.

You will lose 10 points if… It is not in MLA format Heading Title Ink You have not highlighted & labeled Thesis Topic sentences 4 quotes phrases