War photographer Monday, 12 November 2018

DUFFY: WAR photographer – as unseen As with any UNSEEN poem, read this one closely and highlight anything that strikes you as interesting or unusual about the poem Feel free to annotate the poem on the examination paper The most straightforward acronym to assist with an unseen is … SLIME

Use SLIME to organise your thoughts S: what can you say about the structure? Discuss this for 5 minutes. Organised: 4 stanzas of 6 lines possibly reflect organised nature of the job? Each stanza is a stage in the developing process There is a rhyme pattern Negative thoughts in final lines?

LanguAGE language effect In his dark room He has a job to do The language is quite matter of fact but delivers a strong message. 10 minutes this time – choose some to comment upon. REMEMBER that the effect of the language is what matters, not the device language effect In his dark room A dark room is the photographers office but dark is the first of many colour adjectives suggesting here threat and sadness He has a job to do The short sentence suggests the importance of the task and removes emotion form the resultant photo A hundred agonies Each photo both records agony and is painful to look at Between the bath and pre-lunch beers Alliteration of B & P suggests a bitterness in the idea of the easy Sunday of the reader

IMAGERY The is a strong SIMILE to discuss and plenty of colour imagery – come up with some ideas of your own to discus the reasons for the choice of language here. “As though this were a church” uses a simile to suggests the sense of care and reverence with which the photographer works. His photos become religious paraphernalia through this simile. “Black and White” not only reflects the newspaper print but is also a metaphor used to imply utter clarity of information.

MEANING Hopefully by this stage you have some ideas about what the poet is trying to convey. What do you think this poem “means”? Where do you find your clues? The negativity of each final line? The anger apparent in the final stanza? The comment that the readers do not “care”? “to do what someone MUST”? The contrasts in the second stanza? Choose a couple of these ideas and construct a short paragraph to explain the meaning of the poem.

EFFECT How does the poem make you feel? Do you think that this feeling is what Duffy intended? Use the fifth paragraph as a conclusion to draw your ideas together… “Duffy’s poem with its understated criticism of everyday life with regards to attitudes to war makes me feel guilty of my own complacent attitude to events that are not on my “doorstep”. The suggestion that the photographer is like a priest saying Mass helps to reinforce the admiration I feel for this dedicated and brave man”.