What do you notice about these next few paragraphs?

Paragraph 1: In conclusion, Runkel Castle was strategically important to the Runkel family throughout its Medieval history due to its location near a vital Lahn River crossing and being a solid offensive and defensive refuge for the Runkels, and the fact that Runkel castle remains an important fixture as a town hall and museum for the village today. Runkel Castle provides visitors with a glimpse of the past and the opportunity to visualize life in the middle ages. And throughout my research, I’ve found the story of Runkel Castle really does fit the image of Medieval times that I had created in my mind: great castles with knights and lords and harsh battles fought for land and honor. It’s unlikely that the age of castles and knights will come again; however, castles like Runkel will forever tell the tale of Medieval times.

Paragraph 2: In conclusion, Frank Sinatra was an influential musical artist who changed the course of musical albums to date. Not only was Sinatra capable of creating a musical story through his song-choice, but he also never sang the same song in an identical way. He was also well-known for his spectacular breath control, which allowed him to sing for long periods of time without having to break for breath. Throughout my research, I’ve found that, while it has been some time since he’s been alive, Frank Sinatra’s music still appeals to people of all generations, backgrounds, and walks of life. Many singer/songwriters today take some inspiration from what he did - most notably Lady Gaga, Justin Timberlake, and Ne-Yo. While a musician may never again be so wildly successful as Frank Sinatra, it seems clear that he has left quite a mark on the music industry to date.

In your groups... Discuss the ways in which both paragraphs were similar. List the similar qualities of both paragraphs.

An Effective Conclusion: Has a transition (ex. In conclusion, In summary, To conclude, etc.) Re-states the thesis of the paper States what overall stands out to you most/overall takeaways from the paper Lasting thought (Keeps your reader thinking about your topic) Does not include any new information

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