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秋水共长天一色 落霞与孤鹜齐飞

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A Red, Red Rose Part 2 Appreciate and Imitate By Robert Burns

Robert Burns 25 January 1759 – 21 July 1796 Scottish poet National poet of Scotland ----When Scotland forgets Burns, then history will forget Scotland

A Red, Red Rose O my luve's like a red, red rose, That‘s newly sprung in June. O, my luve's like the melodie, That‘s sweetly play’d in tune! As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the seas gang dry Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while! And I will come again, my luve, Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

Appreciation 2. Image（意象） 3. Rhetoric（修辞） hyperbole（夸张） rhyme （押韵） 1. Theme 2. Image（意象） 3. Rhetoric（修辞） simile（明喻） hyperbole（夸张） rhyme （押韵） 落霞与孤鹜齐飞 秋水共长天一色

Theme O my luve's like a red, red rose That‘s newly sprung in June: O, my luve's like the melodie. That‘s sweetly play’d in tune! As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the seas gang dry Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while! And I will come again, my luve, Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

What images are used in the poem? rose melody rock sands seas eternal passionate firm deep pleasant love

Rhetoric O my luve's like a red, red rose Simile (明喻) O my luve's like a red, red rose appearance O, my luve's like the melodie inner beauty Why did the poet compare his sweetheart to a red rose?

Simile/metaphor（暗喻） Her tears fell like rain. Cars on the road far away look like ants hurrying home. His words became a compass for his life. Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny and stormy days.

Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; Hyperbole(夸张) Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. 山无棱，江水为竭，冬雷震震，夏雨雪，天地合，乃敢与君绝。 ——《先秦汉魏晋南北朝诗·汉鼓吹曲辞·上邪》

Rhyme（押韵） O my luve's like a red, red rose Alliteration（头韵） That‘s newly sprung in June: O, my luve's like the melodie. That‘s sweetly play’d in tune Alliteration（头韵） As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the seas gang dry End rhyme(尾韵) Assonance (腹韵) While the sands o’ life shall run.

A Red, Red Rose O my luve's like a red, red rose, That‘s newly sprung in June. O, my luve's like the melodie, That‘s sweetly play’d in tune! As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the seas gang dry Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while! And I will come again, my luve, Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

Time to be a poet Choose your topic and imitate the poem A RED, RED ROSE to write your own poem and share it with your partners.

O, my ______ is like_____________; _____________________________. ______________________________________.  

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Assignment Think about: As a product of western culture, a rose can be worldwide recognized as a symbol of love. How can we circulate our own Chinese culture worldwide?

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Show time Content Standard Evaluation Theme Dose your poem have a clear theme? Rhyme Have you used some rhyming words? Image Dose your poem include some clear images? Rhetoric Have you used simile? Have you used hyperbole?

Taste the poem! Feel the love! Purify your heart!

O,my Luve's like a red,red rose,      That's newly sprung in June.      O,my Luve's like the melodie,      That's sweetly play'd in tune.      As fair art thou, my bonie lass,      So deep in Luve am I,      And I will Luve thee still, my dear,      Till a'the seas gang dry.      Till a'the seas gang dry, my dear,      And the rocks melt wi'the sun,      O,I will Luve thee still,my dear,      While the sands o'life shall run.      And fare thee weel,my only Luve,      And fare thee weel a while      And I will come again, my Luve,      Tho'it were ten thousand mile! a red red rose

melodie Seas gang dry and rocks melt wi’ the sun

一朵红红的玫瑰 王守仁译 啊，我的爱人像一朵红红的玫瑰 在六月里含苞绽开； 啊，我的爱人像一支乐曲 演奏得甜美而合拍！ 你是那么美丽，我的好姑娘， 我爱你那么深切： 我会永远爱你，亲爱的， 直到四海枯竭： 直到四海枯竭，亲爱的， 岩石被太阳熔解； 亲爱的，我会永远爱你， 只要生命永不停歇。 再见吧，我惟一的爱人， 我和你暂时别离！ 我会回来的，我的爱人， 即使相隔万里。

A Red, Red Rose O my Luve's like a red, red rose That‘s newly sprung in June: O, my Luve's like the melodie. That‘s sweetly play’d in tune! As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the seas gang dry Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while! And I will come again, my luve, Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

eternal love

Symbol Rose a. eternal love Rock b. deep love Sands c. staunch（坚定的） love Seas d. passionate(热情的) love

Find All the Old English Stanza 1 O my luve's like a red, red rose That’s newly sprung in June: O, my luve's like the melodie. That‘s sweetly play’d in tune!

As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; Stanza 2 As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the seas gang dry.

Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; Stanza 3 Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. A’: all, wi’: with, o’: of

And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while! Stanza 4 And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while! And I will come again, my luve, Tho’ it were ten thousand mile. Weel: well, Tho: though

A Red, Red Rose O my luve's like a red, red rose That‘s newly sprung in June: O, my luve's like the melodie. That‘s sweetly play’d in tune! As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I; And I will luve thee still, my dear, Till a’ the seas gang dry Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. And fare thee weel, my only luve And fare thee weel a while! And I will come again, my luve, Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.

Detailed Understanding Climax Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. 山无棱，江水为竭，冬雷震震，夏雨雪，天地合，乃敢与君绝。 ——《先秦汉魏晋南北朝诗·汉鼓吹曲辞·上邪》

Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; Hyperbole(夸张) Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun; faithfulness

Gaining, shopping, disappearing Money Important, attractive Gaining, shopping, disappearing Easy come, easy go Wealth

charming fragrant beautiful elegant red-hot

Knowledgeable, unselfish, Understanding, caring, guiding Teachers Knowledgeable, unselfish, Understanding, caring, guiding The one we respect Forever

秋水共长天一色 落霞与孤鹜齐飞