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I like where you said ____, but what about _____? You didnt follow directions. Follow the directions. How did you arrive at this conclusion? This sounds like you dont know what youre talking about. Where did you indicate this? Please refer to chapter 5 and check SAKAI! Could you maybe say this differently? LOL This confuses me. Can you explainthis more? Say more. This is wrong. Great job!

By Annalee Kodman & Susanna Molitoris Miller University of Delaware 2012 TA Conference 8/21/2012 GIVING FEEDBACK ON STUDENTS WRITTEN WORK: EFFICIENT AND EFFECTIVE

1.Explore a framework for responding to student writing 2.Identify and discuss different kinds of written feedback 3.Discuss examples of written work and practice responding positively and effectively SESSION GOALS

1.This confuses me. 2.I like where you said ____, but what about _____? 3.Can you explain this more? 4.This is wrong. 5.You didnt follow directions. 6.Follow the directions. 7.How did you arrive at this conclusion? 8.Say more. 9.Great job! 10.This sounds like you dont know what youre talking about. 11.LOL 12.Where did you indicate this? 13.Please refer to chapter 5 and check SAKAI! 14.Could you maybe say this differently? FEEDBACK ACTIVITY

Based on our activity, what do we think is important to consider when thinking about feedback from the students point of view? From the instructors point of view?

1.Goals of Feedback 2.Instructor Role 3.Kinds of Feedback 4.Timing of Feedback 5.Practical Considerations 6.Student Response SESSION OUTLINE

Focus the students attention (what they have done or what they will/should do?) Provide guidance and instruction Improve student performance (on the next draft, assignment or test) Acknowledge the students work GOALS OF FEEDBACK Question: What are your goals when providing feedback?

FacilitatorDirector CollaboratorAuthority Interested ReaderDetached Critic INSTRUCTOR ROLE

FacilitatorDirector CollaboratorAuthority Interested ReaderDetached Critic INSTRUCTOR ROLE Question: What role will you take to accomplish your feedback goals?

Facilitator Director Collaborator Authority Interested Reader Detached Critic KINDS OF FEEDBACK Student-basedTeacher-based Non-evaluative statementsCorrections Reflective commentsCriticisms Questions (open and closed)Questions Commands Praise

TIMING

TimeConsistency Your state of mind Students feelings PRACTICAL CONSIDERATIONS 1, 2, 3, 4 &%*&!!

Tell students your intentions by providing feedback. Tell students how to read your feedback. Tell students what to do with the feedback. Ask students for feedback on your feedback. STUDENT RESPONSE

PRACTICING FEEDBACK Activitysee handout

Feedback goals determine the instructor role, the kind of feedback, and the timing. Practical Considerations Student Response: tell them how to take up the feedback! WRAP-UP

QUESTIONS? Annalee Kodman Susanna Molitoris Miller