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Introduction Hook? Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea? B3 idea?  Is there a hook? Is there a thesis?  An opinion?  B1 idea-  B2 idea-  B3 idea- Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea? B3 idea?

Introduction Do you like looking in your mirror? Low self-esteem is a significant problem at Al Reyadah School! People should understand this problem and apply solutions! If all schools solved this problem, it would improve the UAE and the world.   Hook Opinion B1 idea B2 idea B3 idea

Introduction Low self-esteem is a significant problem at Al Reyadah School! People should understand this problem! If all schools solved this problem, it would improve the UAE and the world.   Hook? Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea? B3 idea?

Introduction Do you like your reflection in the mirror? How often do you have negative thoughts about yourself? Low self-esteem is a significant problem and it affects the students at Al Reyadah School! People should understand this problem and apply solutions! If all schools solved this problem, it would improve the United Arab Emirates and the world.   Hook Opinion B1 idea B2 idea B3 idea

Introduction Do you like your reflection in the mirror? How often do you have negative thoughts about yourself? People should apply solutions! If all schools solved this problem, it would improve the United Arab Emirates and the world.   Hook? Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea? B3 idea?

Body Paragraphs TS? SD? CS ?  Is there a topic sentence?  Is there supporting detail?  Examples?  Explanation?  Is there a concluding sentence? TS? SD? CS ?

Body Paragraph 1 People must understand self-esteem and the implications for students at Al Reyadah School. Many students with low self-esteem are not good at school. They might be away from school more so their grades will be bad. Some students hate themselves and the way they look. They may feel no one likes them and feel ashamed. They might have few friends and some girls might be cruel and insult them. At Al Reyadah School, girls with low self-esteem might not be involved in sports and other things. Most of all, how the girls feel might change their future. We need to help students with low-self esteem!   TS SD CS

Body Paragraph 1 People must understand self-esteem and the implications for students at Al Reyadah School. Many students with low self-esteem are not good at school. They might be away from school more so their grades will be bad. Some students hate themselves and the way they look. They may feel no one likes them and feel ashamed. They might have few friends and some girls might be cruel and insult them. At Al Reyadah School, girls with low self-esteem might not be involved in sports and other things. Most of all, how the girls feel might change their future.   TS? SD? CS?

Body Paragraph 2 First of all, students can be friends with girls who are alone. Secondly, teachers should teach about low self-esteem. They can tell students to set high expectations for themselves and others. Teachers can reward students for good work. Then, students will become accustomed to feeling proud of themselves. Lastly, the school can put up posters about self-esteem. They can make a support place so students can talk about their problems. It is important for everyone at Al Reyadah school to take action to stop low self-esteem.   TS? SD? CS?

Conclusion Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea? B3 idea? Is there a thesis in different words than the introduction ?  An opinion?  B1 idea-  B2 idea-  B3 idea- Opinion? B1 idea? B2 idea? B3 idea?

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Spelling All words. Use a dictionary Due you lik looking in your mirror? Low self-esteem is a sigificant problem at Al Reyadah School! Peoble should understand this problem and applie solutions! If all schools solved this problem, it wood improv the UAE and the wourld.  

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