Editing Vs. Revising What’s the difference?.

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Editing Vs. Revising What’s the difference?

Revision ***First Step*** Adding, deleting, or changing words/phrases Detail using adjectives/adverbs Dialogue Figurative language Deleting Unimportant information Changing Words to better your paper I went to the store. I drove to the store, which was around the corner from my house. My mom told me to do my homework. My mom said, “Sam, do your homework!” I was super tired. I was so tired that I slept for a week!

Editing *****This comes AFTER revision***** Correcting spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Correct spelling Correct tense Correct grammar Correct punctuation The girl writed her paper but her teecher told her to fixx it, That is why she is in the libary. The girl wrote her paper but her teacher told her to fix it. That is why she is in the library. Sheatetheapple but it was sower. She ate the apple but it was sour. It is raining for two days. It has been raining for two days.

Your Turn I placed my papper on the shelv. 3. Mrs. harper told us to be quite afder clas. Editing 4. I’m fixin to go the store. I placed my paper on the shelf. 2. I hit the ball with my bat. 5. The dog berked at the kat on the fense. Revision I hit the red ball with my wooden bat.