Learning Outcome: Use similes to write a poem Tuesday 20th January 2009 Learning Outcome: Use similes to write a poem
What is a simile? Saying one thing is like another, to create a picture in a reader’s mind. Using Like or As
Complete the following similes The air smells as fresh as Smoke floated on the air like The rose petals are as delicate as The girl sings as sweetly as The traffic moved as slowly as The crows cackled like The children scuttled across the beach like The boy is as fit as His stomach rumbled like Her hair framed her face like
Since Hannah moved away The tyres on my bike are flat. The sky is grouchy grey. At least it sure feels like that Since Hannah moved away. Chocolate ice cream tastes like prunes. December's come to stay. They've taken back the Mays and Junes Since Hanna moved away. . Flowers smell like halibut. Velvet feels like hay. Every handsome dog's a mutt Since Hanna moved away. Nothing's fun to laugh about. Nothing's fun to play. They call me, but I won't come out Since Hanna moved away
As As wet as a fish - as dry as a bone; As live as a bird - as dead as stone; As plump as a partridge - as poor as a rat; As strong as a horse - as weak as a cat; As hard as flint - as soft as a mole; As white as lily - as black as coal; As plain as a pike - staff - as rough as a bear; As tight as a drum - as free as the air; As heavy as lead - as light as a feather; As steady as time - uncertain as weather.
Metaphors - what is a metaphor? writing about something as if it was something else, an imaginative substitution. e.g. heart of the issue the neck of the woods the foot of the mountain