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Objective: to prepare for our first in-class essay November 2, 2017 Objective: to prepare for our first in-class essay Opening: meditation Work Period: grammar Closing: essay structure

Vocab assignments due Monday, quiz Tuesday! Homework Think of 2-3 “dragons” you have faced in your life, and be prepared to write about them! Vocab assignments due Monday, quiz Tuesday!

1-minute Meditation

Grammar, Transition Words

Thesis statement: presents your position on the topic of your paper. Thesis Review Thesis statement: presents your position on the topic of your paper. Usually about 1-2 sentences Found at the end of intro paragraph Be as clear as possible! Ensure the reader knows exactly what you will be talking about. Avoid vague, abstract words: get right to the point of what you will be discussing. Make specific references to your paper in particular. Think: why does this matter? Why should the reader want to read my paper?

Examples Weak thesis: Job opportunities in technological fields are expanding. Strong thesis: Due to the rapid demand of instant communication by cell phone and computer usage, employment opportunities are growing within major companies such as Apple and Microsoft. Weak thesis: The Harry Potter book series is more enjoyable than the movies. Strong thesis: Due to J.K. Rowling’s vivid imagery, strong characterization, and ability to craft suspense, the Harry Potter books are better crafted than the less-detailed films.

Practice Craft a strong thesis stating your position on: Is Valentine’s Day a real holiday? Should school extend through the summer, but the day be shortened? Dogs vs. cats Coffee vs. tea Essays vs. exams