What do these symbols connote? What is their shared topic/theme?
Quickdraw Carol Ann Duffy Tuesday, 27 November 2018 Quickdraw Carol Ann Duffy To analyse the poem “Quickdraw” by Carol Ann Duffy To learn about extended metaphor
Extended Metaphor A comparison between two unlike things that continues throughout a piece of literature, including poems.
Quickdraw I wear the two, the mobile and the landline phones, like guns, slung from the pockets on my hips. I’m all alone. You ring, quickdraw, your voice a pellet in my ear, and hear me groan. You’ve wounded me. Next time, you speak after the tone. I twirl the phone, then squeeze the trigger of my tongue, wide of the mark. You choose your spot, then blast me through the heart. And this is love, high noon, calamity, hard liquor in the old Last Chance saloon. I show the mobile to the sheriff; in my boot, another one’s concealed. You text them both at once. I reel. Down on my knees, I fumble for the phone, read the silver bullets of your kiss. Take this … and this … and this … and this … and this … Annotate: Language techniques (including simile, metaphor, enjambment, caesura, alliteration, repetition) Any references to the Western Genre. How is Duffy using an extended metaphor in this poem?
Step 1: Subject & message Semantic fields/lexis Quickdraw – Analysis Step 1: Subject & message Topic of poem Message of poem Step 2: Language Poetic techniques Semantic fields/lexis Step 3: Structure # of Stanzas Rhyming scheme Flow & tone
Find a quotation for every illustration that matches it. What does it connote? What does it reveal about the relationship?
Creating a Poem Choose one of the images below and write a romantic poem, using the image as the basis for an extended metaphor. The poem could discuss either a positive or negative relationship. MCDONALD’S HORROR FILM SICKNESS
They ask me for my order I ask for a healthy meal They hand me coke and burger I demand a cheaper deal Once the problems clear And we all know what we meant The server smiles politely And off to eat I went The burger tastes delicious But now there is a pain I find a burnt out charcoal And here we go again