Titanic – descriptive writing 30/11/2018 Titanic – descriptive writing Learning Objective: Can I write a descriptive draft based on an image? Starter: have a look at the image on your table. Can you write down some adjectives to describe it? Challenge: can you rank your adjectives in order of how powerful they are? Super-challenge: can you use some similes or metaphors to describe the scene?

All Some Most I use both compound and complex sentences. I vary how my sentences start, sometimes starting with adverbs/ adjectives. Some I experiment with ambitious punctuation such as semi-colons. I use descriptive language, including both similes and metaphors. I have used advanced punctuation such as exclamation marks. Most I have used language devices to create imagery such as similes. I use compound, complex and simple sentences. All I structure my writing effectively, using paragraphs. I use both compound and complex sentences. I have used a range of senses, not just sight.

Applying our skills! You will have 6 minutes to write each paragraph and you’ll have a coach for each one. They will make sure that you are focusing on one of our key writing skills in this paragraph: Punctuation Vocabulary Imagery The senses

6 minutes: You wake up in your cabin as you can hear the ship creaking and people shouting and screaming

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6 minutes: You head out into the corridor, where people are panicking and water is beginning to rise…

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6 minutes: You make your way out onto the deck of the ship: some people are getting into lifeboats but others are screaming and crying. You can feel the ship shaking…

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6 minutes: What happens to you next? Do you make it onto a lifeboat? Do you jump in to the freezing cold water? Or do you fall off the side?

Now have a go at writing up your own answer…

What other senses can you write about? What might you hear when…? Senses Expert You are going to ensure that everyone uses sense other than just sight. In your coaching session, you could use the following question stems: What other senses can you write about? What might you hear when…? How might it smell when….? How would you feel if….? Sentence starters: Hearing: Smell: Touch/feelings: Taste:

Imagery Expert You are going to ensure that everyone uses imagery. In your coaching session, you need to make sure everyone knows what a simile is and what a metaphor is. Record that below: Simile: Metaphor: Sentence starters:

Adjectives: words that describe an object, person or place. Vocabulary Expert You are going to ensure that everyone uses effective imagery. In your coaching session, you need to encourage people to start sentences in interesting ways and use ambitious vocabulary. Teach them about: Sequencing connectives: connectives that tell put things in order (Firstly, after this, eventually, finally, next) Adverbs: words that describe an action (slowly, suddenly, quietly, fearfully) Adjectives: words that describe an object, person or place. Can you think of words that people could use instead of: Loud scary awful weird scared walked looked Horrible bad Are there any other words that people are using too much and could replace?

How to use a semi-colon: How to use an exclamation mark: Punctuation Expert You are going to make sure that everyone uses exciting punctuation in their work. To begin with, make sure they know: How to use a semi-colon: How to use an exclamation mark: How to use ellipsis: Some examples to help you: The iceberg towered above me; snowy, dusty peaks in the distance. Without warning, a wave reared up! I held my breath and peered around… we were all stunned into silence. Can you write an example of your own?

Skill: What I have learned: Great example: Punctuation: Senses: Vocabulary: Imagery