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Results, Discussion, and Conclusion       Results and Discussion (Simulation or Experimental)

Results and Discussion PURPOSE to present the results and make them meaningful to the reader. What the Results and Discussion Section includes    statement of results: the results are presented in a format that is accessible to the reader (e.g. in a graph, table, diagram or written text).  Notice that raw data is usually put in an appendix, if it is included at all. explanatory text: all graphs, tables, diagrams and figures should be accompanied by text that guides the reader's attention to significant results.  The text makes the results meaningful by pointing out the most important results, simplifying the results (e.g. "nearly half" instead of "48.9%"), highlighting significant trends or relationships.

Results and Discussion COMMON PROBLEM The text includes too much detail that simply repeats data presented in graphs, tables, etc. without making the results meaningful. Solution: remember that tables etc. are used to present a lot of information efficiently, but that your job is to direct the reader's attention to significant parts of this information.

Results and Discussion ORGANIZATION There are two basic ways of organizing the results: Presenting all the results, then giving a discussion (perhaps in a different section) Presenting part of the results then giving a discussion, presenting another part then giving a discussion, etc. The method of organization you use will depend on the quantity and type of results you obtain from your research. You should look for a method of presentation that makes the information and ideas you are presenting as clear as possible to the reader.

Example 1 This dataset contains 16 objects with 4 attributes whereas each object only has 2 categorical value. Results as shown in Figure 2 clearly indicates that the MAR technique successfully overcome MMR and MDA techniques. In details, MMR and MDA respectively consume approximately 0.0017 seconds of execution time to process the dataset. In contrast, MAR technique requires only approximately 0.0013 seconds of execution time. Thus it clearly shows a reduction of execution time by 0.0004 seconds. Although the number of reduction is small, however, it is relevant because of the small size of the dataset.

Example 2 It is clear from Fig. 2 that FOLD-growth outperforms FP-growth by a huge margin under all circumstances except in Fig.2 (D1A) where it performs only slightly faster than FP-growth for low support thresholds and in Fig. 2 (D3A) where it exhibits similar performance as FP-growth….. There is no need to create so many nodes as the SOTrieIT allows L1 and L2 to be discovered without much computation and without database scans….

Cont….. “FOLD-growth outperforms FP-growth" The writer is pointing out the performance of the results. Notice that the writers refers to the figure containing the information Fig. 2 (…..), and that detailed sentences are de-emphasized by saying outperform by a huge margin. “without much computation and database scans” Also, the writer discover SOTrieIT approach needs less computation as compared to others.

CONCLUSION PURPOSE To give a summary of:    What was learned (this usually comes first) What remains to be learned (directions for future research) The shortcomings of what was done (evaluation) The benefits, advantages, applications, etc. of the research (evaluation), and  Recommendations.

     Too long. The conclusion section should be short. Often the conclusion section is as little as 2.5% of an entire piece of published research.    Too much detail. Conclusions that are too long often have unnecessary detail. The conclusion section is not the place for details about your methodology or results. Although you should give a summary of what was learnt from your research, this summary should be short, since the emphasis in the conclusions section is on the implications, evaluations, etc. that you make. Failure to comment on larger, more significant issues. Whereas in the introduction your task was to move from general (your field) to specific (your research), in the concluding section your task is to move from specific (your research) back to general (your field, how your research will affect the world). In other words, in the conclusion you should put your research in context. Failure to reveal the complexities of a conclusion or situation. Negative aspects of your research should not be ignored. Problems, drawbacks etc. can be included in summary in your conclusion section as a way of qualifying your conclusions (i.e. pointing out the negative aspects, even if they are outweighed by the positive aspects). DISCUSSION COMMON PROBLEMS

CONCLUSION    Lack of a concise summary of what was learned. In order to be able to discuss how your research fits back into your field of study (and the world at large) you need to summarize it very briefly. Often the summary is only a few sentences. Failure to match the objectives of the research. Often research objectives change while the research is being carried out. This is not a problem unless you forget to go back and rewrite your original objectives in your introduction so that they accurately reflect what you were trying to accomplish in your research (not what you thought you might accomplish when you began).

CONCLUSION Here is an example of an objective and conclusion that do not match: Objective: The main objective of this study was to assess the impact of roadbuilding on villages on rural communities. Conclusion: The model produced in this study can accurately predict the social and economic impact of road-building on villages in Pahang. If we rewrite the objective to match what we actually did (we developed a model), it will fit the conclusion: Rewritten objective: The main objective of this study was to develop a model to predict the social and economic impact of road-building on rural communities.

CONCLUSION EXAMPLES 1 Read the texts below and see if you can decide the purpose of each highlighted sentence (e.g. summary of research, major conclusion, problems/drawbacks and other negative aspects, qualified conclusion, directions for future research, structure of the writing). A Support-Ordered Trie For Fast Frequent Itemset Discovery Y.K Woon, W.K Ng, E.P. Lim, “IEEE Transactions on Knowledge and Data Engineering, Vol. 16, No. 7, pp. 875-879, 2004. Conclusions With the explosion of data, it is critical to use suitable data structures for data mining for timely results. We have proposed a preprocessing data structures known as the SOTrieIT to enhance the performance of association rule mining. Besides being support independent, incremental, and space-efficient, it allows FOLD-growth, a lailor-made algorithm for SOTrieIt, to perform more than 100 times faster than FP-growth as seen in our extensive experiment. 

CONCLUSION CONCLUSION – Text analysis EXAMPLES 1 “proposed a suitable data structures for data Mining for timely results . . ." Major conclusion of the research. “Besides being …..."