Warm Up Friday, February 9th Read over these sample hooks for the topic of “gun control.” Revise them, and then rank them in order of effectiveness. Why is it that people’s perspectives on gun control vary so much? Imagine that a person with guns has broken into your home and has taken your pet Fluffy as a hostage. Knowing how to access the family gun, are you prepared to protect your family? While 90% of American families have seen a gun, only 20% have been trained to shoot other humans.

Learning Targets: I can write a hook for my introductory paragraph. I can write a rough draft of my introduction for my senior research essay. I can revise my thesis statement.

Hooks - Models Startling Statement - All human beings are capable of the most gruesome crimes imaginable. It is only because of the customs and controls of civilization that we do not become brute savages. Shocking Statistic - On a recent anonymous survey, over ninety percent of high school males admitted to secretly enjoying the music of 'N Sync and to practicing their "hot dance moves." Scenario - A close friend of mine was in the Vietnam War and he admitted to me that he was terrified every time he had to go into battle. Even so, I consider him one of the most courageous men I have ever known. It is not the absence of fear that defines courage, but the ability of one to force oneself to take action in spite of fear. Analogy - The models that grace the pages of magazines seem to be better than anyone we have ever met: they seem elegant, untouchable, and perfect. But, just as magazine covers are manipulated to hide imperfections, we, too, sometimes fool ourselves into ignoring the flaws of individuals whom we have built up to be perfect beings. Philosophical Musing - Why is it that, if a person were to have his or her navel suddenly disappear, we would think that their stomach looked weird? I mean, that darn navel thing is pretty weird just being there, don’t you think?

Group Activity Write a hook with a group! Pick a struggling group member, and use that person’s research topic as the basis for your idea. Your group will be assigned one of the following types of hooks to write: A startling statement A shocking statistic A scenario An analogy A philosophical musing

Learning Targets: I can write a hook for my introductory paragraph. I can write a rough draft of my introduction for my senior research essay. I can revise my thesis statement.

Introductions - Hooks The Hook Use something surprising to grasp your audience’s interest:  Students are often surprised to know that many of their instructors were not high-ranking students in their own graduating classes.  In fact, one of the most well-respected Composition instructors here at Madeup University flunked Freshman English not once, but twice! Then, it comes back in your conclusion: Any student at Madeup University will tell you that the teachers who once   struggled in their subject area are the most helpful.  Remember that Composition teacher who flunked Freshman English twice?  That was Mrs. Somebody-- a popular Composition teacher and well-liked tutor in the Writing Center on campus.  The best guides are those who've experienced the struggle themselves; these teachers truly help students climb toward academic success. Remember, it is not enough to hook your audience in the beginning. You also have lead them on a journey that comes back around in your conclusion. There is no such thing as “next season” in papers- so NO CLIFF HANGERS!

What Goes Between the Hook and Thesis Statement? Here are the three main tasks that an introduction can accomplish: Connect/appeal to the reader. Anticipate their needs. Orient them to their coming “journey.” Intro. Strategy 1: Provide any background material important to your argument (anticipating reader’s needs). Intro. Strategy 2: Define key terms, as you intend to make use of them in your argument (anticipate their needs).

Thesis Statements Must include your problem/issue, and a quick overview of each perspective on the problem. May be 1-2 sentences.

Introduction – A Checklist A good introduction should… Describe what you plan to write about Give the reader some idea of how you plan to discuss or approach your topic Give background information on your topic (when appropriate) Include a clear, concise thesis statement Establish a connection between the writer and the audience

Homework Rough draft of intro – Due TUESDAY A compilation out of all the sources you found last week (I’m hoping to see at least 10, and this list can be informal) Due Thursday, 2/15 A Formal Works Cited sheet of all the research you intend to use. Due Tuesday, 2/20