M6U5 The Lake of Heaven Reading for Writing Jieyu Ye

Any natural attraction that I should visit? interested in natural attraction which? what's it famous for? tell us more? learn to describe an attraction

What does each paragraph mainly introduce? To be a fast reader What does each paragraph mainly introduce? para. 1 Changbaishan para. 2 Tianchi para. 3 A story of Tianchi couples para. 4 Suggestion for __________ To be a sharp reader Read paragraph 2: What's your impression of Tianchi? (pick out details to support your impression) why do people do that? which one is the most important?(title)

In winter the lake freezes over cold Objective (客观的) information What people do What people see deep more than 200 metres deep 2194 metres above high It takes an hour to climb (to the lake) on the top of the mountain In winter the lake freezes over cold how does the author describe tianchi? which description is more direct? why do you think so? how did this show tianchi is high? those information describe tianchi is high by telling us___________? how did it show tianchi is high? this is about ? the sight of clear water....the view of 16 mountain peaks that surround it. beautiful

In winter the lake freezes over Objective (客观的) information What people do What people see more than 200 metres deep How people feel? 2194 metres above It takes an hour to climb (to the lake) on the top of the mountain In winter the lake freezes over Reminder: Describe the attraction from different aspects (basic information, what people see, what people do, how people feel) it desscribes tianchi by...... what else?what other aspect can we add? the sight of clear water....the view of 16 mountain peaks that surround it.

Reminder: Make your descriptions support the main feature(特征) of the attraction To be a sharp reader Read paragraph 1 Pick out descriptions based on their aspects Changbaishan is _______________? Objective(客观的) information What people do? What people see? How people feel? the largest natural reserve varies from 700... to....is home to a great diversity of rare wildlife people come to study its wildlife. others come to walk in the mountain, to see waterfalls and to bathe in the hot water pool find out descriptions based on their aspects. what's your impression of Changbaishan? any different impression? do those descriptions mainly show Changbaishan is beautiful? what things do they have in common? from those things, what kind of environment is changbaishan? rare animal, mountains, waterfalls, the lake of heaven

divide the groups, group 1, 2, 3 write one or two sentences to describe Nanxijiang in what they do, what they see, how they feel. the last group can pick whichever they want to write. make your description connected and vivid.

How to describe Kanas Lake? Main feature: clear water What people do What people see support! support! How to describe Kanas Lake? Main feature: clear water How people feel support! support! Bbjective information

To be a skilled writer Use one or two sentences to describe Kanas Lake from one aspect (make it vivid) Kanas Lake is famous for its crystal clear water._________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ___________________________________________ divide the groups, group 1, 2, 3 write one or two sentences to describe Nanxijiang in what they do, what they see, how they feel. the last group can pick whichever they want to write. make your description connected and vivid.

Homework 1. Complete your writing 2. Read the passage carefully again, and pick out some good words and sentences structures to polish your writing.