September 1-2, 2016 Find the ten mistakes in the paragraph at the top Answer the multiple choice questions

Where are the mistakes? (1) Have you read a book by Lemony Snicket! (2) Lemony Snicket is not a real persons name. (3) Its and imaginary name used by the author of the A Series of Unfortunate Events books. (4) In those books, which were first published in Septemer of 1999, readers follow Violet Klaus, and Sunny as they attempt to protect their fortune from greedy count olaf. (5) The identity of Lemony is secret. (6) but he communicates thru his representative, Daniel Handler.

Multiple Choice 1. What change should be made to sentence 2? add a comma after Snicket put a semicolon before real change Lemony to lemony add an apostrophe to persons 2. What change(s) should be made to sentence 3? add a comma after name break it into two sentences with a period its to it’s and and to an change imaginary to imagery   3. What change should be made in sentence 4? change Septemer to September remove the comma after books remove the comma after 1999 add a comma after Sunny 4. How can you revise sentence 5? Although the identity of Lemony is a secret, he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler. However, the identity of Lemony is secret, he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler. In addition, the identity of Lemony is a secret, he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler. Therefore, the identity of Lemony is secret, but he communicates through his representative, Daniel Handler.

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Today’s Objectives Content Objective Today I will review one of our new vocabulary words by writing the definition, at least two synonyms, drawing a picture and creating a sentence using my classmate’s presentations Today I will work with a group to develop a description of Malala using evidence from the text I am Malala and my notes Language Objective I will be discussing the novel and its main character, Malala, using acquired vocabulary, with my classmates as well as re-reading the text when necessary, and writing my ideas down to form a coherent character portrait

Today’s Questions Who is Malala? How can I relate to her? What character traits does she possess? What proof do you have of her character? Do we judge others without proof? Should we?

ADVANTAGEOUS

PARTNERS ONE PERSON LOOKS FOR THE PHYSICAL TRAITS OF MALALA ONE PERSON LOOKS FOR THE MENTAL TRAITS OF MALALA

Malala character portrait 14 points 10 points 8 points 4+ physical trait words 3 physical trait words 1-2 physical trait words 4+ mental trait words 3 mental trait words 1-2 mental trait words 2 quotes from the novel describing Malala physically 1 quote from the novel describing Malala physically quote(s) are weakly linked to physical trait(s) 2 quotes from the novel describing Malala mentally 1 quote from the novel describing Malala mentally quote(s) are weakly linked to mental trait(s) Correct Spelling 1-2 spelling errors 3-4 spelling errors Colorful and Creative Colorful but plain Lacking color Both quotes are correctly cited using page numbers Only one quote is correctly cited using a page number Quotes are lacking page numbers

CITING QUOTATIONS